Samsal

For some we are or I am the one or one of many. this was actually quite good, though i didn't quite understand this line.besides that is exceptional. :)

not bad, though Shine is right about the seems to carry a sweet melody with it and it has alot of potential. great job and keep up the good work.

well it was good for a start. dont sweat it if the comments seem kind of harsh. it's only to help you grow and become better. dont sweat the small ...

this is nice. i dont feel much from it though, but i get what you were you trying to say. the whole he loves me,he loves me not topic. nice ...

I'm so sorry, i left him all alone crying on his bed. I had no choice they made me! I swear that I'm so sorry. He called me, but i ...

your hand on my shoulder and my breathing too fast and too unwell, the concern in your eyes could avert the end of the world. I remember your lips on ...

oh my. this is such a nice piece. great job. it was a long poem but i didnt get bored at all. when you can write a long poem and ...

this is new. good poem. lots of spelling errors though so i suggest that you go back and review your poem and see what could be done to make it ...

this is really something else. this poem brings emotion to me. it is very sad. i like it how it is but i do think that something else could be ...

this is not bad. i like the idea behind it and it could use some work but it is great through. oh yeah and i agree with the others. it ...

not bad it was cool to read. it didnt really bring out much emotion from me but it is still great. i do like it alot and i think that ...

well it was a nice poem. it was fun to read and writers block can be such a pain!!i dont really feel anything when i read this poem. it is ...

the kiss was more lust than anything.

oh... this poem was very good. i hope you showed it to your neighbour. i could tell that you cared about that which you were speaking.nice :wink:

The Vampire He accidentally cut his hand, it bled. Oozing from his hand, dripping on the floor. I watched it fall, every drop sounding different from the last. I wanted ...