Samsal

This is a nice poem but it does feel like if its dragging on and on. Listen to OverEasy about the chatspeak trust me I have been eaten alive because ...

yeah i really liked this poem when you first started....you had me and i was with you until the, "my chest is infested with mold" line. this seemed a bit ...

thanks for all the advice on how to make this poem better thank you

this poem is nice short and sweet and i wouldn't have guessed that u were talking about although it is also the title good job very interesting poem

I do not have it in my heart to hate... Even if you make me crash and burn. I do have room in my heart for love, just because I’m ...

this was nice. touching. yeah i wasnt sure if there was a rhyming scheme at first either but it was very sweet.=)

Who are you? I see you there Always at the back Hiding your face in the shadows Of the people who you follow You stand there Trying to fit in ...

thank u both...

I wish you wouldn’t look at me With lust in your eyes, As you slowly examine me. Wish you wouldn’t lick your lips, As you look at the swell of ...

thanks for your input. it means alot. :)

To the one who stole my heart To the one who stole my heart, Give it back to me! Can’t you see that I need it? Don’t you see the ...

ummm...not bad. could use some work but still very good and well put. is it just me or is there some spelling errors there?hmmm. good job. anyway=)

nice was rather depressing...but is probably one of reasons why i liked it. i like your repetition of remember. i agree that the fourth stanza is a bit confusing. i ...

The rain falls and so do I a remnant of my former self. Falling from the pain and anguish and many more. Dreaming and failing as the nightmares chase away ...

to live to die to die to live to grieve to change to change to give to give to get to get to give to grow to fail to fail ...