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Ah Sageleaf I was trying to explain what it feels like when you see someone dancing and you feel like you could join them, I cant look away from the ...

Close enough to kiss. Close enough to touch. Yet they stood barely moving… Slowly the tempo rise, And their bodies with it. They move like parts of each other. Looking ...

This was very nice. I loved how it ended and good for Jake for sticking with her. How did you do in the contest? Great story, nice ending and I ...

Wow I loved it! Why does it have to be a short story though? Im already dreading the end...I want it to continue. Good job and im looking forward to ...

Wow this was seemed to have a lot of emotion. i wished he discribed Alister to his sons more, give them some history, state how soon after Alister's death did ...

Dedication shows, Perspiration leading to success.

Thank you to all those who commented. It really helped and I really appreciate it =)

Dedication shows, Perspiration leading to success. A spark of Inspiration like a light in the dark, bright colours in shades of grey, Making you hope for a change Reaching out, ...

Okay, this story was nice. A bit depressing but not bad. I think that you should describe it more. Describe the what he thought when he came home or since ...

this story was quite interesting. I didnt want it to end. I love how you modernized the story of sleeping beauty. Great dialouge too. Cant wait to see where this ...

This was really good...quite enjoyable i must say. i could really picture the characters saying those things, although i still think the only thing your stories seem to be lacking ...

yeah well I read both and yes this was really good. I too think that you should describe a bit more.That is the only thing that both part one and ...

yeah this was interesting.I like how you went along with something that could happen in the book. this was very well done and i really could picture the characters saying ...

hmmmm this was rather this seems to be someone that has some self esteem issues. it is nice, but i wished that you had explain more what was going on ...

okay well it looks like im going to be the first...this poem seems so doesnt need to rhyme and everytime you try to force a rhyme in, it threw the ...