Sampson

YAY! With me there is no such thing as a review too long, especially if you liked my story. I actually had a hard time with the beginning paragraph because ...

I'm so tired of men obsessing over eyes. It's so stereotypical and just makes one big scoff build up inside me. But hey your poem sounds good... heheh... hehe... yeah.... ...

You can't use the word more and stronger, or more and better, or more weaker, more anything that implies there is already more.

I had to mention the suspenders too many times and there arent a whole lot of synonyms for them so I used the British, braces, which also means suspenders. I ...

Nope sorry. It's just a little short story.

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In he first and second paragraph you don't end the quotes but instead begging another I too of the unfinished. "How can I know what you said is true?" This ...

You'd think will the lack of female pronouns...

Lol it's so sad how children aren't as informed or as accepting as we really should be.

I'm more or less happy with it now. I also made sure to specify that he doesn't love rather than he can't.

Thank you for all of your reviews! I'm about to go in and made all those grammar errors right. I've been writing all of these on my phone. I just ...

Thank you for all of your reviews! I'm about to go in and made all those grammar errors right. I've been writing all of these on my phone. I just ...

I'm already well into working on chapter 4 and from what you've said I think you'll really like it.

Wow thank you! You know hat the third chapter is up right? I couldnt get it to go to the green room or what ever. It was just being weird. ...

The world taught her that a mans approval is all that matters, and if she can't get a guy she's useless to society, especially if she wont have children. Sorry ...

I was actually kind of confused at first. I was just sitting here waiting for it to load for probably 3 minutes before I actually looked at it. Then I ...