SammyMercury

Hi! So...writing from a guys perspective. I guess I could say that I have some experience with that :D . First off, I like what you are doing. I think ...

Hi! First off, I like your poem. You have great ideas and you really seem to put yourself out there, which is what lyric poetry is all about. That being ...

Hi! First of all, I like this poem. I think that you are successful at conveying your emotions, which is critical. Minor details that I think would help slightly would ...