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Now here is where I am worried it will get confusing. I plan on continuously flipping point of views! Now it's Ali's turn! Ali Carmen had managed to get my ...

Part two! I'm really excited at the reception of the first part. I really hope that this part is a good continuation! I know it's under the fantasy novel section ...

Since a couple people have asked this, Ali is thirteen because the school system I am familiar with, there is a school for K-grade 7 and then the high school ...

I am interested to see how this will turn out. I found it had okay pacing, yet I felt that there could have been a little more description. Maybe if ...

I'm not a big fan of beginnings that start with "It was a..." I find those to be overused and a little cliche. Also what time is this set in? ...

Wow! For a something that you just jumped on the computer to write randomly, this is great! As I was reading, I really didn't get a feel to what the ...

This is a work in progress that I have given so much time and love! I really appreciate all the advice and remarks! Carmen Bacon and scrambled eggs was a ...

Thanks! All those tips helped! =D

In the novel I have been attempting to write, there's a huge fight scene. However, every time I sit down to write it, thinking I have every thing figured out, ...

I really enjoyed this short story! At first I was a little bit iffy on continuing to read it but I wasn't at all let down! I liked how you ...

Well, hello there! I'm a newbie to this site! I stumbled upon YWS while going through some forums on writing on another site I regularly visit and thought it would ...