Samara

hey, i really like this. keep it up. just a few suggestions. "I was pretty much pissed the rest of the day, then I got home." i'm thinking you need ...

sorry, i posted on the science fiction forum, but i will review again. you're thirteen, right? ok, so realizing that you're thirteen, i totally can see that you have potential, ...

i agree to some extent with biancaryne...the wording could be a little different. i mean, you don't have to sound like you're writing an Arthurian legend. make it personal. make ...

So basically before I ramble on any longer, I'd like to know, is this book SUITABLE? And that is my original question, believe it or not. Gosh, I've rambled so ...

i wasn't crazy about Eragon. yes, it was cliche. Eragon as a character made me want to hit him with a baseball bat. Murtagh should have been the hero, Eragon ...

yeah, well, the only problem with it in my opinion, i was just slightly confused as to what happened in the end. that could probably be cleared up. and i ...

I loved Uglies! Pretties kinda depressed me, just because i felt bad for David and I liked him way better than Zane. but i haven't read Specials yet. my library ...