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Hey again-again, KiteRide! :wink: Another grand section- I really do love Chantal. She's sweet, but a bit of a ditz...a well-developed ditz, that is. Forrest is a heavy bit of ...

Hey again, KiteRide! I liked this chapter quite a bit, too- it definitely lived up to your first. :D Edna was an interesting character...more subtly developed than the rest had ...

We're not French. Ooh. Means I've got to learn a bloody pointless language that I shan't use with anyone, besides my mother. - Adelais ...me. And Jeremy, too, but they ...

Hey, Chocoholic! You have a very easy-flowing, natural style...it's quite nice to read. Definitely not choppy, definitely refreshing. :wink: There were a few things I'd change about Kara's word, thoug

Hey, KiteRide! This was a really cool story! Usually, I tend to shy away from reading contemporary stuff, because the characters and conflicts often fall flat. I was proven wrong, ...

Yes...I don't know. I'm not exactly beautiful, so it takes more effort to look normal. Especially when one has friends like David. - Upton If I said yes, I'd be ...

Bah, I'm rusty with the present tense, right? :wink: I'll definitely fix those. Question, though: would having it change from a limited perspective to an omniscent perspective kill the feel? ...

When you're using description in sketches, it often feels awkward because you sort of feel the impulse to write, "Harry, a stout-fifteen year old boy with blue eyes and brown ...

I think it was Holly Lisle's site (the one that El loves, and I love as well)- something about "Feel free to steal ideas, but twist them and shake them ...

Hey, Magicman! Ooh, I loved this piece- a bit of mysterious fantasy in a cabin in the snow? Automatically awesome, in any way, shape, or form. :wink: I did like ...

Hey, DisposableHero! I like your writing style very much- it's emotional, but very beautiful and flows without a hitch. You have an interesting conflict, too, which is always nice to ...

There's no meaning to it, it's utter nonsense. But the reason for it, you mean? Eh, write me an essay. I don't know. - Master Blackwell Life is a mere ...

Hey, Snoinkus! Here's the thing- your style is perfect for disturbing subjects. It's just detached enough to make it seem flippant, and the way the narrative is done, the people ...

The Minister's Daughter , by Julie Hearn, is a historical fiction book about teen pregnancy. Interesting, right? A non fiction, The Body Project , by Joan Jacobs Brumberg, would be ...

Hey, Heaven Sent! New historical fiction always makes me happy- especially with super-awesome characters like Jacques Ambler. He was done really well, as the others have said...usually, the characters