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Hey, magicman! Ah, another excellent segement. Crystal's coming along nicely- and the whole conflict with her and her hallucinations is really expertly done. One problem, though- you had two unneeded ...

Hey, Oregongirl! Ooh, Nahimana's pretty brave- the ending was super awesome. Cliffhangers rock, don't they? I hope you carry the excitement, though- I want to know what happens! There was ...

*kicks satchel of nicked hallucinogens behind desk* Why, no, of course not, darling.. - Adelais I've only done that twice in my life, for the sheer joy of it- both ...

Hey, Sassy Lady! This was a really cool story- it's definitely different. I loved Fonda, the reporter...she was super cool. One must often risk lives for good journalism, indeed. :wink: ...

Hey, Wiggster! Ooh, I love your writing style- it's so sweet! And, what's more, you managed to do an emotional piece without making it totally sappy. Never mind that it ...

Thanks, Tri! Yeah, Claude said that Annabelle needs a little more fleshing out- that's my current mission. Hopefully, that'll help a little with the relative slowness. :wink: Deepness? *shies away ...

Thanks, Imp and Tri! :D IMP: Ergh. I love those adverbs a bit too much, I suppose...I'm about to try Fand's removal activity, and I shall see how many of ...

Hey, Girl_in_pink! Definitely a fun story- very readable, with a character who's not openly whiny but excellently sarcastic. :D There was one thing I would change, though: THE HOOK: This ...

Ah, Fandness- this is an awesome article! This is a problem I've seen a lot (especially in my own writing :roll:)...something definitely to provide a link for in critiques. When ...

Mmm...it's my one attribute, really. I can't lose things. Everything that I own has its own little desk, drawer, cupboard, that sort of thing- nothing is ever gone. - Upton ...

Hey, Flamatoria! This was a really cool story- quite original. It wasn't something you'd see every day in the forums, and for that, I was glad. :D There was one ...

A PDF is a document that people can download but can't edit. That'll help protect your work from plagiarism. First off, tell me the name of your novel and all ...

*counts fingers* In the Verplanck library, in prison, in the Newgate House, and at the hands of Blackwell when I didn't finish my work last week. - Luke Oh, only ...

The easiest thing to do is simply to hit 'return' between paragraphs. I did that for your post above, which I'm technically not supposed to do...but it was largely for ...

Annabelle's Ten: - Gentle obedience makes a good wife, and a good wife has a good life. - Help others, no matter the cost to you. - Work when tired, ...