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Hey, Tickled Pink! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ This was a really impressive piece for a first post--you've got a really great start. Kate sounds amazing--are we going to see the ...

Silly Haley. XD So, I decided to completely revamp the first part of the book. Here's the second chapter, so completely disregard everything you read after the first part...*people run ...

Pretty much every major religion condemns homosexuality. Personally, I am a Christian so you probably know how I feel about it. Please don't make blanket statements like that. Not every ...

I was working on this today and realized that I'd completely forgotten to thank you all! I'm terribly sorry--I've been playing with your suggestions all day long and forgot. How ...

I don't even think this is a legitimate discussion, as American psychologists determined in the 1970s that homosexuality was not a disease. I personally believe that it's innate, especially when ...

Hey, Monki! It is so unbelievably cool that you get to write a novel for class. ^_^ Hopefully, you'll send us some tips you pick up along the way? Anyway, ...

I personally am a strong believer in the fact that you should--if possible--not describe your characters at all . Of course, there are exceptions. One of my characters is really ...

I'm not the greatest Ellen Hopkins fan, but it seems to me she chose the format because it's easy to tell the story with a good degree of emotion--it's "raw". ...

Hey, Blank_Ink! Cool story--you obviously know what you're doing, and it shows. The storytelling is comfortable and natural, which is something you don't often see. ^_^ There were a few ...

The nightmares...oh, that's really embarassing to say, but it gets bad, sometimes. -Luke *shrug* I just never sleep? It's uncomfortable. A bed is so confining. It feels like a coffin--there ...

Oh, goodness. I, uhm...yes. - Upton Yes. What is wrong with me? Someone, tell me... - Luke *snort* - Adelais What's a--? Oh. Well, then I'm not one of those. ...

Hey, Kelsi! Ooer! A speech! I'm an uber-speech nerd, so I might be a little rough on you, but this topic is frankly amazin' raisin. I want you to do ...

No. One reality is enough for me, thank you very much. - Luke Isn't that kind of scary? Mommy, that's really scary... - David Oh, darling, I talk to everyone ...

Monki--you didn't post an artwork for critique, so I figured you'd get more reads and responses here. ^_^

*nerd* I did mine on posterboard--it's kind of hard to see, but it's got all the main buildings. If you're just going for layout, don't worry too mucn about scale. ...