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Double fabness, Ed. Thanks for the feedback. ^_^ ___ April 08 PHOENIX, or, Set Fire to the River Where flames met the earth, you put your hands to the ground ...

Thanks for reading, guys. ^_^ ___ April 07 KANSAS, BLEEDING KANSAS. (I’m sorry, Toto.) What was first must also be last— you were a child of this earth, born of ...

*falls asleep on keyboard* This is beginning to feel a lot more like NaNoWriMo, now. XD ___ April 06 Rhythm in Blue. The binding of black held the audience captive— ...

Oh, I do love this. It sounds cool written and it sounds cool spoken--awesome sauce, as far as I am concerned. "And drove a stake through to keep from air." ...

Oh, Tillychan, I adore this poem. " when you blink I go blind" was probably my favorite line, but the sheer weirdness of it was rather fantastic. I think the ...

Oh, Yeats. ^_^ I definitely adore the second poem--things with questions in them usually bother me somewhat, but the language was very pretty and it fit.

Ed, you are quite fabulous. XD If you're intrigued. Additionally, the Pawnee is taken from a textbook from God knows where, so please excuse my very likely butchering. ___ April ...

Huzzah! Comments = awesome sauce. __ April 04 Smogdust I found a bead from your bracelet in between car tires and asphalt, and when I bent to pick it up ...

Vern...quite frankly, if it weren't so "rife with tradition" for European males to not have the operation, you'd be all for it as well. This is kind of a strange ...

It's probably been articulated in this thread before, but (if you're a straight person) why would you want to be gay? It's setting yourself up for a life of snide ...

^_^ Thanks again, guys. This feels a bit like continuation of yesterday's, but. I figure when stuck in a creative rut, it is best to get it out of your ...

I second that. The one thing that bugged me a little was the vulgarity, and I'll tell you why--Mrs. Crochet is okay, because that has the potential to be really ...

I actually love the line, 'just fractal, babe', but it feels like it belongs in a different poem. Take it out here, but don't completely scrap it. But yeah. I ...

Hey, Nafees. ^_^ 2nd Day: I really like this poem--it was the cute "writer's block" poem without the cute. However, you slipped into some informal language at the end that ...

Hey, Lexii! Music = awesome sauce. ^_^ Welcome to YWS! Feel free to make yourself at home--review a few things, post a few things (with the magic 2:1 ratio) and ...