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Tillychan! You know I would make sandwiches for your characters any day, so I shan't gush too much in that regard. However, there was one line that bugged me especially: ...

...forgive me? I've kind of lost track of what days these belong to. XD TEXAS CHAINSAW MASSACRE, or, WHAT THE MIST HID Broken piano keys held the secrets to the ...

Oh, Cal. These are so perfect, as usual--I can't thank you enough. ^_^

Ah! Yes! *high fives* You're getting much better at keeping a joke incorporated longer, rather than a bunch of one-liners. It's absolutely fabulous. One thing you might want to watch: ...

Hey, God! I've not seen you around before, so. *tips hat* I'm going to treat this poem as a starting point. Why? It's short, sweet, and isn't worth improving--so instead, ...

What if we were to have one of the requisites for each storbook be "Level of Skill" so to speak? For example, if you wanted to write a storybook with ...

Hey, zoey! I've been wanting to sit down and read this for ages. ^_^ Ishmael seems like a really cute character; I'm excited to see where you go with him. ...

Hey, JustMe! *high fives* Welcome to YWS! Definite kudos for trying out poetry; it's definitely not the easiest thing to start with. I think my main problem with this poem ...

Hey, Snoinkus! Thought while I was on a poetry-critiquing kick, I'd stop by. I really do enjoy this poem. You took imagery from music/ballet, which people have done before, and ...

Hey, babyboymilky! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ Make sure you do as Saint said and make some reviews--it's a bit daunting at first, but you'll find that they really help you ...

Hey, revolver! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ One of your major goals as a beginning poet is developing your own style. This is a rather daunting task at first, mainly because ...

I need to do a poem for yesterday...the day I slept through. XD __ April 10 SOUTHERN CHIVALRY (FOR CHARLES SUMNER). The brooks you cross will be twofold— when you ...

Hey, OverEasy! I've been wanting to look at some of your work for awhile; I've finally gotten the chance. This was a really sad story for me to read--dealing with ...

Hey, ash! Here are two articles you might want to check out: Too Darn Hot Sidestepping Mary Sewage Those are just some general things that I reference in critiques all ...

This came from my PoWriMo thread, so don't fret if you've seen it before. ^_^ ___ Where flames met the earth, you put your hands to the ground and watched ...