Sam

what is this, the writing forum soap opera?

Yeah I'll change that...I just needed SOMETHING there! :D thanks guys.

What was going on? I never knew he might actually carry out THE PROJECT, it was far too risky and we'd never quite perfected it before. And my parents, the ...

wonder how they came up with it...lol!

I like this site a whole lot better too...it's more fun, I guess, since there's more people and all. :D Glad I know someone here, though!

Ooh la was very good, and that puts into words what a lot of us feel, huh? :D Here's what I liked, since I don't have any crit: *Great analogies. ...

OK, I'll be nice *lol*. My only crit that I saw that at the end...well, duh, don't you usually use a knife to hurt someone (or a pat of butter?) ...

I live in Lincoln, Nebraska and it ROCKS!!! and I only live like 10 minutes away from the capital building, which is awesome by the way

OK, this is a good poem and all, but you're pretty vague. What happens when he/she comes into the room? What happens when he/she speaks? I keep telling everybody's poem ...

OK this is great for a start to a short story, novel, poem, whatever. 1. Pick a number between one and ten. This will determine your main character. Then when ...

I was kind of forced, I wanted to write a poem I just didn't know how to start one anymore...ah well, I'll stop because I'm depressing myself! :D

I wasn't even here the other day so I don't have anything against you... :D I don't really think your poem needs tearing apart. Here's what I found and liked ...

All I can say is...I agree with everyone else. You do write poems very well! And it was very inspiring, to say the least. :D

Ya, I agree with both of them...:D Only crit would be 'see' in lines 2 and 4 should be 'sees'...Hey, I really liked it. Normally I don't care for rhyming ...

*brushes away tear* i'm 11...and now suddenly inspired! :D