Sam

Yes, it is awesome...I say this to everyone, sorry, but this is really, really emotional! It's great. The only thing I'm wondering is that line about 'Just let me shed'...I ...

haha...that's my job!

You're welcome...:D It's really cool! Hey, don't mean to beg, but could you read my new untitiled story? I've had it up for a bit but nobody's read it...:D

Yes, it's really creepy! the thing about you describing the stench of the blood and stuff...yecch, really realistic! And that creepy lady and all the decapitated dead girls in a ...

Yes, it is haunting...with the forgotten toys and and the laughter of the neighboring children or whatever. I loved it based on a true story? I feel bad for asking ...

I love the part about how she's a writer...you did that on purpose, didn't you? *lol* same stuff goes for the characters as last time, they're all really quirky. Like ...

I think you just voiced aloud what everyone thinks...that, wouldn't it be great to be a newborn? Not caring about anything, not about how you looked, not about what others ...

Incandescence...you're usually way tougher than I am but now I have to agree with you...a lot of people have written poems like this about 9/11, so you have to really ...

It was OK. *lol* we're just buttering you up so you'll feel good and write more...just a question, how do you write a sonnet? Once I know that I can ...

I thought it was kinda creepy...Alexis is obviously troubled (duh, Sam!) But you don't just say 'Alexis was sad because her dad is a drunkard and her mom ingnores her. ...

It makes you think...maybe that's what he's getting at? *lol* work that brain, cars and guitars!

this is really cute...I love the connection to the Kids Next Door, that's what makes it cute. He's got potential!

Again...this is really really good! So, like usual...instead of constructive crit, I'll tell you what I like. *you're true to your characters. They don't really change all that much throughout, ...

Yes, I think it's pretty good...I don't really have any constructive criticism, so all I can say is good job and work on it some more...see what you get! I ...

I was gonna call myself Gene Krupa but oh well...(inside joke!)