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Re: New Poem (be afraid, be very afraid!)
Ever notice how That one snowflake Or leaf Floating in space That you focus on Always seems to dance for you? Show off? Boast? It twirls and twists like and ...
Jan 6, 2005 -
Re: New Poem (be afraid, be very afraid!)
I actually wrote 2 last night... here's one, can't find the other one! [Peculiarities] It's funny how People set themselves apart Like how I throw my hands away From my ...
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Re: This site needs blogs!
Hey I have no idea what a blog is...but cool idea!
Jan 6, 2005 -
Re: DRAVEN'S ANGELS
welcome...It's really annoying when you feel like you have to compress your writing to make it shorter, huh? I hate that... :D
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Re: Edge of Reason
*sorry guys I just had to do more!* "Kyle...what happened?" I lay sprawled out in the floor in his basement, trying to sort out what had happened. "You, uh..." "I ...
Jan 6, 2005 -
Re: Over 13: The AIM Tango
Yeah...this is awesome! You guys made a big fuss about language...I must be blind because I didn't notice it! :D I have a chatroom myself, there really are moment like ...
Jan 6, 2005 -
Re: Guys...
Hey I don't mean to beg but for the last couple days I've been going around like critiquing fiend, trying to read everybody's everything...and I have one story I'd like ...
Jan 6, 2005 -
Re: Chapter 1 (Taking suggestions for a title)
I swear I think I've read this before...have you ever been on Real Kids? Well, it's still great the second time through! I don't really have any crit for you...just ...
Jan 6, 2005 -
Re: Boundless- Read this one instead of the other one!
woah! I normally don't go into the fantasy section because I don't care for the genre, but I'm sorry I didn't come in here earlier. This was great! You start ...
Jan 6, 2005 -
Re: DRAVEN'S ANGELS
This is pretty long, so I can't give you all that deep critique...:D My only bit would to go over it and look for grammar mistakes- like in a coulple ...
Jan 6, 2005 -
Re: Regrets *1st post on here* lol that isnt the regret!
My suggestion- pretend this is happening to you. How would you feel? I mean, a lot of kids are afraid to present their problems to a counselor or something, and ...
Jan 6, 2005 -
Re: What are you listening to?
"...THE BOULEVARD OF BROKEN DREAMS WHERE THE CITY SLEEPS AND I'M THE ONLY ONE AND I WALK ALONE AH AH, AH AH, AH AH AH AH..." can't get that out ...
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Re: Bridges
That's fine...anything ya got!
Jan 6, 2005 -
Re: magnetic poetry
Magnetic poems are awesome! They're fun, and they make you think when you read them...*lol* these were cool! :D
Jan 6, 2005 -
Re: My Heart Has Been Sealed
cool...well, first of all, I have to write some more poems?
Jan 6, 2005
