Sam

It's something like New Story- Need Title Of course, I'm sam..it's in Other Stories section. :D I'll get to the Sun Prophet right away!

where is it? I'll read...if you read mine *lol*

Yes, the whole 'animals come out to play' just gives it away. Up till that point, we think, 'OK, I get where she's going'. Then you just think maybe this ...

Interesting poem, just one suggestion- don't call it 'grief'. to put it in Incandence's words, it's like telling us 'we interrupt this program to deliver the obvious statement of the ...

I agree with Incandescence. Haikus are fun to read, but you can only agree or disagree, you can't critique. Of course you can relate, too, like with this one...:D

It's a very wierd topic, department store mannequins, but you made it work with out being overly wierd. :D You have some great points in here, about the teenager and ...

It is...*sniff* I could never write lyrics for songs. Notation, ya, but no lyrics. This is sooo different from a lot of what they put on the radio now. :D ...

If Incandescence liked it it MUST be good...*lol* I thought it was a great idea, the poem/story mix. :D No crit here!

Morran you ROCK...I totally agree with you! and it's a lot harder to write stories...poetry just comes to you, I guess, stories don't.

cool...gotta keep that in mind, next time I get into a poetic state of mind (if that ever comes) thanks! :D

Ya, I guess you have to really strive to make it original, since a ton of people write this kind of poem. You could do that by like adding examples ...

*so hurtful* jk anyway, thanks, I'll go over them!

the real Jay wrote that in...thanks! :D

I find it easy to pretend it's me talking...like, what would you say? instead of the formal, "Good day to you, Samantha" (a greeting to me) someone might say, "Hey, ...

J:Ah, Saskatchewan. *sniffs* a beautiful land...dense rainforests, friendly natives, cute little monkeys that swi- S: (jabs him) Hello, I'm Nameless Cheesy Commerical Woman here to welcome you to sask