Sam

Yay! That's what I was going make it sound like I'm just typing down what somebody said to me! yay! it works!

I know...but like you said, Firestarter, look back at what you did a year ago. It doesn't even compare to the new stuff! And you've got the rest of your ...

Again, like with your other poem, forget the language. It's a great poem! I like the style...that was lame, but oh well, I can't find anything else to critique on. ...

I'm doing my part...posting a coupla things every day...*lol*

woah...this was really great! A lot of people try to vent in their poetry but don't do it correctly...forget the language! this was awesome!

Gene Krupa (inside joke)

I have to be Ewan...*lol* The saltwater stung my eyes, and and I panicked, looking for a window, some way out. As I searched, all I kept thinking of was ...

I thought it was OK...the rhyming is unnessecarily pronounced, though. For a poem like this, which a lot of people write, you need to make it special. Write it in ...

Cool! all my stuff is in 'other stories', firestarter's is in 'fantasy'. That would be awesome!

"What's starting again?" He asked, a look of utter horror and befuddlement upon his face. "You ivented this...this THING...you should know what happens after!"

Just wait a bit and let something come to you...:D

Morran you're really good...:D I didn't find any mistakes or anything. It's just kind of wierd how they sat there for years and years...it's hard to tell if you're being ...

Thanks! I just read that story and I was so involved before you know it there's 10 chapters...I just admired it, I guess.

*blechhh* I know it's pretty bad...that's OK, I still got revisions to do. (sorry being chatty!)

second snowday in a row...got time on my hands too obviously!