Sam

Ooook then...blackbird, no offense, but four posts and you already come off as wierd. Do you try?

Well, I have nothing better to do, so I decided I'd better write a bio. In Q and A format. Fast Facts Well, Sam, where do you live? About 20 ...

sounds good...where are your stories? I'll critque them...:D

I thought it was HILARIOUS...it's really cool! Very true to life...*lol* I enjoyed this. Keep it up! (K, I know that was lame...)

yes...this is a very nice and well written poem. :D It reminds me of me and my friends...*sigh* good job, I don't have any critique.

Very, very interesting to say the least...*lol* I'm looking hard, but I can't find anything to critique, Morran! This was a great section...if you've got any more I'd love to ...

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oooh...this sounds really good! please get to work on it right away, missy, or I'm going to get after you....*lol* :D

Yes...I agree. This was very well written. :D Everything seems to be in check...I don't have any critique for you, the only thing I can do is tell you I ...

This poem is interesting, to say the least. :D I'm not really sure the message I got from it yet...still undecided. That's OK when a poem does that, however, as ...

I really enjoyed this poem. You don't just say 'I like to play the piano' and sum the entire poem up in two lines. We have stuff to figure out...it's ...

OK, this poem is pretty good. However, you lose your audience near the last stanza. You make this huge deal about how these 'phantoms' are so bad, and then in ...

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i wanna know! :D

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