Sam

you've got me! probably firestarter too...

*sniffs* how dare you insult my bowling for soup! ah well...:D Like I said, it's just my opinon.

These are just some songs I've heard that helped me make something up or are just really creative. :D They're either just meditative or have interesting lyrics. Ohio [Come Back ...

*parody of Lemony Snicket* The boy wore absolutely nothing except for a t-shirt, jeans, socks and two shoes on his feet.

rain can't think of anything else!

Mesh...UNL Middle School Band Camp actually...you sit with your amazingly spitty sax and play really really hard music for five hours so you can play at Kimball Hall...not marching! :D

*blushing* err...well, we do get 'Eau de Hotness'...

I'm trying to find a decent one...:D May take awhile! (stupid band camp pic isn't up anymore!)

and YES! that was the lamest thing I've ever said in a critique!

I agree with Incandescence on some things...but then again, just some! I really liked the first stanza, it reminds me so much of home...*fake sniff* anyway, cool poem. :D I ...

Yes, it was very well written. My only question would be, if this girl Emillie was supposed to be dead, would the sister be just a little more freaked out ...

yeah...I've been itching to read your stuff 'cause you have a cool name...*lol* that sounded wierd but that's OK. :D

i figured...*lol* :D

I thought this was quite good. :D Poetic, to be sure. It wasn't really a story, but that's OK, it did have sort of a plot...*sigh* no critique, for now. ...

well, yeah...it's a great example for description, if you need some advice. :D