Sam

my family's been in the us since like 1636...hehe...mostly English/Irish/Lithuanian. What an interesting thread...:D

This made me chuckle...I love the 'watch me make spit bubbles' thing! :D

Nate- this has to do with the thread. *lol* I agree with niteowl. Evanescence is depressing and Cold Stone is awesome. You going to share?

*slaps Arvandor* Ya, we'll miss you... :cry:

Voted Basher...:D

Cool poem. :D I'll give you critique/compliments stanza by stanza. First stanza- I love the first two lines! It reminds me of my old house. Agreeing with Firestarter, the last ...

I have to say it was pretty good for such a short piece. :D I don't really have any critique, except for the fact that yes, it is rather short ...

CAG! I love your hair!!!! :D

Hey firestarter, I think you just summed up the entire topic in like 2 sentences. :D

*clue phone rings* Oh, sorry, it's for the government. Wrong number.

I did like this poem. :D Just some bits I caught. First stanza- Weeeoooweeooo! Cliche at two o'clock! 'Children of the sun, moon, and stars'. You need to change this ...

Hehe...:D I kind of agree with Incandescence, as it doesn't make sense at first glance. You kind of have to go through it a couple times to get it. That's ...

*gags* we had them here for middle school!

Incandescence, I make sure to read and post SOMETHING on all of your poems. They're so good...you don't want to miss them!

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