Sam

this is nowhere near as serious as what you guys are talking about...but i seriously think our public schools are....sexist. Like, in PE, boys can do 81 laps around the ...

sorry...:D

someone who shall remain nameless...*he he*

Ok, Firestarter, i'm going to be tough on you so get ready!!! 'Esben looked genuinely shocked, and exclaimed “Relic! Relic, he says! This ‘relic’ has been passed down by generation ...

green stuff...ewwww

That's OK. make it rough. We readers like that kind of stuff. :D

It's actually quite good. :D No real critique...I thought it was great. A little on the strange side, but that's OK. If i think of anything later, I'll tell you.

it was, firestarter...:D just something I came up with off the top of myhead

the language at the end is Scottish Gaelic. :D it reads like this (know the grammar's wrong...english word order!) sleep, sleep my child slep and dream

Your beating heart A soft, slow thumping that Never ceases Your words tickling my ears with Their calmness, their serenity A rhythmic cadence of neverending Happiness dream... As we sway ...

i thought this was pretty good. Though I thought it lacked a little description. You say this guy has a Brooklyn accent, yet you don't tell us what it sounds ...

and anyway, they don't even kill foxes much anymore. Mostly they just drag around a bag of fox pee and the dogs follow the scent. but i'm still not giving ...

hekate! you're so cool...where'd you get your shirt? here's what I look like- i have rimless glasses i have curly brown hair that's frizzy unless you put it up i ...

her! anyway, hekategirl always has conversations with me through PM at like 9C. :D cool

i'm the baby, so typically i think of everything as angelic...*lol*