Sam

'It still made my head clang and my headache drum faster. ' These two lines were very clunky to me. Though I know it's just the repetition of 'head' that ...

Interesting. Very interesting. And good. But, boy, do you wander. The poem is here then it jumps across the street and over the fence and then to Denmark. Confuzzling, if ...

The only thing I would change would to be to make the whole Ukranian thing a little less obvious. Throughout the poem, you're expecting some sort of outrageous political statement, ...

Rhyming is, let's say, something I very strongly dislike. So, as you can guess, I'm not going to be very nice. But bear with me, Lindsey, OK? Short, sweet, got ...

Wow. This is so Mr. Brightside. You portray the feeling of that awkward moment...that awkward moment when you say hi to someone you haven't seen in awhile and you really ...

*plays dumb american* What's a crumpet?

The same person is talking. :D That's why.

WHEE!!! sorry. ha ha. But what parts did you think were too descriptive?

I got it. Like i said... Very good. You got the point across, and it wasn't clunky or dumb like other poems of its kind...

I loved the last line. '...sometimes' ha ha. Cool No comment. Though i did post something. Like you said.

aha, mr. regressing has written a good poem!!! meant to give you harsh, over the top critique...but no, can't find any. *insert four letter word here* I love the image ...

Hmm.... 1. Boulevard of Broken Dreams- Green Day 2. American Idiot- Green Day 3. Laura- Scissor Sisters 4. She Will Be Loved- Maroon 5 5. This Love- Maroon 5 6. ...

I saw Napoleon Dynamite. 'nuff said. 0/10 for plot. 10/10 for originality.

Yay wu!! you don't look like i pictured you though...

*lol* now i'm not the only obsessor, am i?