Sam

'I’ll never know but the summer my mother died and the summer my father abandoned me I stopped loving.'- Uhm...this is so...soap opera. Change this a little bit so it's ...

uhm...I've never even heard of her. *runs to library*

I'll critique this later, after school. So far, so good!

ASHLEY!!!!! Yay!!! you get this as a gift: lol :xmas_evil:

depends on how long it is.... if it's like 400 pages long, post a page or two at a time...if it's 500 words, then post the whole thing. oh, i'm ...

ha ha. I've sparked a conversation as to how to make your parents think you're bleeding..interesting

Thanks. haha It's just something I noticed because, at first glance, you go 'what?!' you get it eventually, i just thought you needed just a little bit more explanation. It's ...

Eh...kind of indifferent. Not the best poem you've written, Firestarter, but not the worst either. the fourth stanza just kind of reminded me of Blink 182. 'all the small things, ...

It was just adding on to concious thoughts one at a time. lol that's why it's so confuzing

OK this originally started out with the idea for the first line...then i just had fun with it and kept adding to it. sorry, it's rather rambling but oh well ...

See, i got a wow and a... HA HA!!!! Loved it, PsyLynx. It's very interesting to say the least. Gosh sam, the best you could do would be to say ...

I would like to thank... The Traveling Hobo Bobs- for the wierdest group name and the best trip to DC ever Billy Schwa (aka my 5th grade class)- for accepting ...

ha ha. I come on usually 2 times a day, for at least a half hour or more each. Usually before school, then after school for an hour.

thanks. :D

OK, this is rather long but i just got the idea for it off the top of my head. :D there's this tiny little side street just behind the park ...