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Re: News
Funnnn i know i already said that *eats rock candy* and i said that too
Feb 24, 2005 -
Re: I Hate You Mum
Awwww.... Why does it have to have a sad ending? *cries* Emma, this is very good, like your Rachel pieces. I'm looking for something to critique on, 'cause we prose ...
Feb 24, 2005 -
Re: One Morning, After Some Time
*blinks stupidly* I've never heard of the guy... Sabine, after reading a couple of your poems, I've decided you're one of my favorite poets on the site. Your poems are ...
Feb 24, 2005 -
Re: Last sacrifice
oooh.. Another great rhyming poem. Well done, guys! Not too Lucky the Leprechaun. Anyway, I thought this poem was really good. Beautiful, more like. I really wish I could give ...
Feb 24, 2005 -
Re: Untitled
No ideas for names, sorry... Anyway, I thought this poem was really good. It was kinda reminiscent...pleading...yeah...and not too old-ladyish like many poems of its kind. Only thing, don't use ...
Feb 24, 2005 -
Re: Right By You
I'm ba-ack...*smiles evilly* I have way too much time on my hands...:roll: Anyway, this poem was probably the best one of yours I've read so far. One of my pet ...
Feb 24, 2005 -
Re: It's not easy for me...
This is going to be a poem you really have to be committed to working on if you want to make it work. A ton of people have this type ...
Feb 24, 2005 -
Re: What I want
And what was that one thing you found that you like? *duh duh dunnn* I like the basic IDEA of the poem, but you don't really seemed to have grasped ...
Feb 24, 2005 -
Re: Post your own Pic thread
*gawks at brad's latest pic* MOVE OVER SHEA!!!
Feb 24, 2005 -
Re: back in the grind
I noticed the in thing pretty early on...thanks for stealing all possible critique, Tara! lol i seriously don't have any critique. Other than to say the lame-o usual great job ...
Feb 24, 2005 -
Re: Temporary Board!
where's my bloggie blog blog? *waah*
Feb 23, 2005 -
Re: A Clockwork Orange by Anthony Burgess
That's sounds like a cool book...*runs to library*
Feb 23, 2005 -
Re: word salad
Ha ha!!! I love the line about the dancing polar bears. fun stuff... It's pretty short, but to the point, and, besides which, it's pretty good. Kinda confusing, but you ...
Feb 23, 2005 -
Re: [ Too much? ]
I thought it was OK, for just getting back into it. The only thing i noticed was that you get kind of weak...boring, even at the beginning, but at the ...
Feb 23, 2005 -
Re: the unnamed story part 1(where in our hero meets death)
Hey, it's pretty good, just next time, post a litle bit more, mkay? It makes it easier to critique.
Feb 23, 2005
