Sam

Oh, Jack, this was great!!! You had an OK beginnning...but I loved the last two lines. I don't know, there's just something about it that's part funny, part serious. How ...

the points system is working nicely. I got like twelve new reviews on things I didn't even know i wrote...:D

I though this was really good. You got your point across, and quite well for a poem of what, 10 lines? Hmm...let's see... 'across full pink lips when/you're too close ...

And you want detailed criticism on this??? Bcain, it's great the way it is! I expected it to be some stuffy, oh my grandma died and now i'm sad when ...

It's cool. :D You have to write some more stuff in this format.

Oh that's a long story...lol COMBAT BOOTS AND ALL-STARS ROCK!!!!!

I'm really liking the new points system. Now you don't really think about donating points...:D You've got so many of them!

I really did like this poem too. Just the title in itself is great...folly. FOLLY! sounds like some kind of variation on the slugbug game. lol That's kind of against ...

Wow, Wulie. I thought this poem was great. You personified very well the feeling of being anxious, waiting for someone to email you, send you an instant message. Which is ...

I so agree with Skye and Misty. If this is you at your worst, what are you like at your best? lol I thought the first stanza was the best. ...

Willow...I know I've commented on this countless times, but you have a very elegant style of writing. And your work is a nice break for us critiquers, having to go ...

Uhm...Brad, you officially creep me out. But that's OK...I have to agree with everyone else. It was really funny. Especially the first two paragraphs...the whole sort of goth thing really ...

wow liz...you really have a knack for poetry. Your poems are usually very wierd on the surface, but very, very beautiful underneath. I think this is one of your best ...

I was just going to say that...I loved the ye and yers. Awesomeness. It made the poem really unique. And yes it does sound like a clan of cannibals talking...

I know...wow. It certainly is nice to not have to go picking through to find errors and clunkiness...