Sam

Me? lol who is brad talking about...

This is a pretty good idea, you just need to add some more shtuff to it. Right now it's *ahem* kinda...dumb, if you get what i'm saying. I like the ...

yeah, that made me laugh so hard!!! haha, I thought this was very well done though, Faith. It was part extreme gross out toward the end (note the age) but ...

HAHAHA!!!! This is so stupid I'm not even going to critique it. Stupid in a good way, at least lol. That's what I hope you were going for anyway...duh duh ...

i'm not trying ot make him look bad! He's dead! and besides, it says i heart gene krupa all over my binder at school. even though I don't know him...a ...

I thought it was pretty good. Though i know I'm biased because I'm white, I got a whole kind of whining vibe throughout the entire thing. I know black people ...

lol Brad I love it but you don't have to rewrite everything i write...lol

gas *rolls eyes* there goes me, the eleven year old

I thought this was really, really good. Beautiful, even. However, I thought your beginning and your middle were really strong, but the end didn't really live up to the expectation ...

OK...this poem is another reason why I hope no one from school ever finds this web page. This is about this guy I know...long story. But I really like this. ...

yeah, I have to say I really like this poem. As the immature eleven-year-old, I just had to say 'ewww' to the nice mental image of glistening white maggots...yukk. Lol. ...

I so agree!!! I really, really like this story. It's kind of mysterious...and...frrreaky. But it's cool anyway lol. And I love the name Bevan...have to remember that one. You have ...

Hey, I have to get caught up with this story!!! I read this part and was like, wow, this girl can write. So, I may cmmment more once i read ...

Ha ha. This was certainly not the usual stuff...lol, great job on this one! *wipes eyes* You got me laughing so hard.... 'The price of freedom is kind of steep, ...

Yeah, i have to agree with Matt. As usual, very good. :D I feel kinda bad, that I don't have anything to say...but I seriously don't. 'Careless fingers smudge like ...