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Re: Does anyone elses eyes change colors?
Mine are hazel too. :D But they change with the seasons. In summer, there's more blue, in winter, there's more green.
Mar 1, 2005 -
Re: Once In a Purple Moon-very short
It's an interesting idea, for what it is, but I think you need to flesh it out a bit. This is OK if there's a word limit, but if there ...
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: .
This is open to everyone, right? lol I thought this poem made some really good points. You had a to-die-for beginning and end, but you kind of ramble at some ...
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: Reserved Tears
I thought this was pretty good. Kind of short, but that was OK for what this was. Very original, and...kind of...strange. But strange in a good way lol. My only ...
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: neutiquam erro
I already told you what I thought about before. But I think it's pretty cool that I like it as much the second time...and the title is very cool. Nice ...
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: That Look
It's OK for a first try, but it's definitely not one of your best pieces. For one, it kinda dragged on and on, seemingly going nowhere. For two, it was ...
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: Opening the Door and Inviting Him In
Yeah, i have to agree with Wulie and Brad. I've read some of your stuff, Chevy, and it usually has a lot more depth and meaning to it. This sounds ...
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: The Fields of Waterloo
I thought this was really good. Even with my limited knowledge of English history, this still made perfect sense to me. And, you had a lot of odd and awkward ...
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: Regarding Vampires
This was really cool...you must have way too much time on your hands. I thought it was quite interesting, though it sounds like it should be a research paper or ...
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: (Title working in Progress)-13+ for language
I thought this was really good, however, you kinda lose me at the beginning. You go on and on about Shiyah, and after a while it's kind of...*snore* But then ...
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: Three Small Thoughts
Wow...this was really good. You have a very unique style, Sabine, that's for sure. Unique in a good way, at least lol. 'All these words are too vague, inaccurate, fleeting, ...
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: Kinda Depressed I Guess.......
Yeah, I thought this was really good for a rhyming poem, considering I *ahem* don't care much for poems that do. They sound forced, unoriginal, to me, but this one ...
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: that glow
this was really good. I don't know what to was very beautiful, and obviously heart-felt. I would be mad at the administrators too...Did this really happen to you? If so, ...
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: This word reminds me of...
SPONGEBOB!!
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: MINIMIZED!
He quickly dodged the bottle, hearing it splat and spray everywhere. He felt the blue liquid on him again...
Feb 28, 2005
