Sam

Yes, I have to agree with Incandescence- and you, lol. It seemed like you knew where you wanted to go you just didn't know how to say it... Later, I'll ...

Yeah, I have to agree this was really good. For weeks I have been waiting for a piece for my revenge...*hehe* 'here is where the world gets light and the ...

definitely...ice hockey, competitive swimming, volleyball, and HORSBACK RIDING! (english)

This seriously did make me laugh...here's what I got from it. So, there's this girl who's majorly freaked out because she's been having conversations with a ghost in her garage. ...

hahhahahhahah! I thought the last line was really, really funny. The poem itself was so-so, but I think you did a really good job with it for what it was. ...

hey I have to remember that...lol

some dead drummer guy

Willow and Firestarter... I would say incandescence but he quits too often...lol

Hey...now I get the second one after reading this one again. lol, sorry.

I have to say I liked this a lot. It was way, way better than the original. Although i thought the original was great...??? lol. I can so relate to ...

Ehmagod...did I really post that back up there? I should have said then...that I seriously wasn't breathing for the entire time I read this. That it made me get teared ...

It was a little too 'Let's Save the Rainforest!' for me, but I thought it was pretty good, especially with the pendulum analogy. That was pretty cool. I've never heard ...

Reminds me of the Boulevard of Broken Dreams...*cough* green day obsessed... I think it needs a little fluffing up. It was OK for what it was, but it sounded kind ...

Yeah, Liz, I have to agree with both of them. You're like the queen of analogies! I have to say I liked the first and the last stanzas the best. ...

Of course, I haven't really read much of your stuff, so I don't have anything to compare it to, but I thought this was really good. It's very interesting, very ...