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Re: Lockdown, Chapter Four
You're really having fun with this, aren't you? lol. No mistakes that I found that Hunter didn't more comments, either.
Mar 13, 2005 -
Re: Guess things About The Black Rose
cookies
Mar 13, 2005 -
Re: One line Summary
"My mom bus wight about hoda awd my teef." What would you say if you and Jack were the only ones one the planet? (hee hee this shall be interesting)
Mar 13, 2005 -
Re: Lockdown Chapter Three
OK, this is pretty good, just don't use the word 'Donovan' so much. Use a pronoun instead. :D you're on a roll today, Liz!!!! keep it up!
Mar 13, 2005 -
Re: Rachel: Hiding
EMMA!!! quit writing so well!!! I know you asked for comments...but I truthfully can't find any... the cute nurse guy. niiice
Mar 12, 2005 -
Re: One line Summary
"Hmm...pink...no, orange...no...gah, could someone else decide!?" What would you say if you were sent to a mental hospital?
Mar 12, 2005 -
Re: Lockdown, Chapter Two
you can wipe blood off, you just have to have nature's miracle or whatever
Mar 12, 2005 -
Re: Lockdown, Chapter Two
BUH BUH BUH BUMMMM!!! oh...my...gosh...TBR, this is perhaps the best thing you've ever written. It's great, it's emotional, and you can totally see it. and i love the ending..
Mar 12, 2005 -
Re: Lockdown, Chapter One
WOOHOOO!!!!! Ok, one thing to say...this made me laugh so hard. You truly pay attention to the things in your school, don't you? SURVIVAL OF THE FATTEST!!!!! and of course...you ...
Mar 12, 2005 -
Re: The mental paitent (revised)
I didn't read the other part of it, so I don't have anything to compare this to, but I did think it was really well done. This person seems so ...
Mar 12, 2005 -
Re: War (I wrote this when I was younger and stupid)
I know I am. :twisted:
Mar 12, 2005 -
Re: One line Summary
"Pretty colors." what would you say if everything you touched turned to gold?
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: One line Summary
"Ohhh...now the magazines...and jail tips...are free!" What would you say if...George Bush lived in your attic?
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: Tut Tut! (lame I know but he's kewl)
Where'd you get that one? 'zit cream inside his s-a-r-c-o-p-h-a-g-u-s...'
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: One line Summary
"She sounds amazingly like me..." what would you say if your cat suddenly imploded and then vanished?
Mar 11, 2005
