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Lyrics at the beginning of each section are from 'Bowl of Oranges' by Bright Eyes. Translation of the French is at the end. ___ I came upon a doctor who ...

Hey, LilyReagan! XD I love your description in the little sub-title thing. It looks like it's going to be quite great--this bit was really short, so I'll hold my judgment ...

Hey, CloudNight! This was a clever story--that's totally how I feel about supermarkets sometimes. People will be walking around, buying bread and when their heads are tilted at a certain ...

K-K-K-kylan! Okay, so. That was amazing. XD I really have nothing to say beyond: I love Lena. The most kickass ending in the history of ever, I would deem it. ...

Oh, Kylan. As my band director would say, this is baby-throwin' good . Your words are exquisite. I want them for breakfast, lunch, dinner, and midnight snack. ...you see what ...

K-K-Kylan! You make me happy. And why do you make me happy? Because you're amazing. It's true. Andrew Bird owns my soul, as does this story--it's absolutely beautiful, and, as ...

Hey, a_perea1203! Welcome to YWS. Haha, as long as you use spell/grammar-check you should be okay. :wink: Before you get settled, be sure to read the rules and review like ...

Kyyyylan! You make me smile. - ramble about metaphors (one of these things is not like the other) - fear of commitment--more attention on language than character

Hey, Lorraine! A lot of your readers--especially if you're posting on YWS--come from different backgrounds. Personally, I don't know a lot about big cities in general, so a Western or ...

Hey, Chanson! This (much like your blog entries ^_~) was both beautiful and intimate. It's really cool when a person can take a situation so dirty and human as a ...

Hey, note to self! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ Haha, I feel your character's pain. I'm in summer school, too--granted, it wasn't because of fart machines, but. Poor guy. Since you ...

Huzzah! Last installment. ^_^ I must say, though it freaked me out at first, I loved the juxtaposition of the different scenes in one. My main piece on that would ...

Hey, again. ^_^ Oh, my goodness--I'm really not a rambler when it comes to the happy, encouraging bits (does this say something about my personality?), BUT. I must say. This ...

Hey, Icaruss! Okay, so. You kind of own my soul. XD How did you manage to nail setting description in first person...? That's just not fair. Not to mention you ...

Jabbs! *boogies down* I'm totally a sucker for an old-fashioned gangster story, and you delivered. ^_^ The action flowed very nicely throughout, and the story kept me on the edge ...