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Re: Mind the Gap [edit, round one]
You guys are amazing . ^_^ I did some basic things that you suggested, and I'll be working with this piece a little bit more today. Sachiko-- Hai. ^_^ I ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: Summer Reading Recommendations
The Wondrous Brief Life of Oscar Wao , by Junot Díaz Everything Is Illuminated & Extremely Loud & Incredibly Close , by Johnathan Safran Foer Stiff , by Mary Roach ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: Main Attraction
Hey, deafwriter! I'm glad I finally got the chance to read some of your stuff. ^_^ This story is cool--you built up the church atmosphere really well, as well as ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: Sherry the Ghost (4)
*weeps* No more...Sherry? No more Lacey? How can this be?! *sniff* Well, now that there's no more crack to go 'round, I suppose I should tell you that this was ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: Mind the Gap [edit, round one]
Notes: This takes place entirely on a Japanese commuter train. The name 'Takuya' means 'creativity', but mangled to 'Takoya', it means 'octopus store'. 'Yankii' is a punk subculture--if you're a ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: A Lively Conversation Between Two Corpses (3.1-4)
This is the last part--thank you so much for reading/editing. ^_^ ___ She squeezed Miles’ hand and left him for Neuhaus’ shoulders and the dark of the hallway. The slight ...
Jun 28, 2008 -
Re: Sherry the Ghost (3)
*weeps* 3/4? That's not fair. I love Sherry and Lacey more with each section--they're such great characters, and kind of heartbreaking, in a sense. They're wonderful, and I wouldn't have ...
Jun 28, 2008 -
Re: magic Kisses
Hey, guys, this is getting kind of ridiculous. It doesn't take twenty-eight people to say the same thing. When the author visits the site again, I will unlock this.
Jun 27, 2008 -
Re: A Lively Conversation Between Two Corpses (3.0)
I can't thank you guys enough for the critiques--they're fabulous. __ So I sat with him a while, and asked him how he felt. He said, “I think I’m cured— ...
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: Sidestepping Mary Sewage
Let's say I wrote a character named Alabaster Seafolous Rainbow Auracast Annette called "Silver" by her friends because she always wears the hottest platinum clothes her daddy buys her, making ...
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: Neutral Milk Hotel
They have that kind of Elliot Smith factor--they're not around anymore, so it's twice as cool. XD I lovelove the characters in Two Headed Boy, plus Goldaline and the Pree ...
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: Neutral Milk Hotel
Mmm, yes, In the Aeroplane Over the Sea is probably the best album I've ever heard. ^_^ It's so not-beautiful and raw, and yet the lyrics are amazing--they're kind of ...
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: The Elbe is Filled With Prayers
*thwaps* Kylan . You didn't tell me you posted this! At any rate, you're my fourth red star, so be proud, though I don't think you deserve it for being ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: A Time Before
Hey, Mor! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ Quick mod note--before you go crazy posting on the boards, we ask that you keep a two to one ratio of reviews to each ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Sherry the Ghost (2)
Yay! More Sherry. ^_^ I absolutely love the fact that she's transgendered--it seems so wrong and so perfect for her at the same time. It adds to her surreality; we're ...
Jun 25, 2008
