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Re: For Your Pleasure
Hey, Speele! That's actually a really interesting idea--a selfish revolution, instead of a selfless revolution. It's kind of the anti-1984. If the sociology behind it all was somewhat legitimate, I ...
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: Abkhazia, Resolute [introduction]
The formatting on this is going to look really strange--especially if you're using Chimped Out. If you're using Chimped Out or just want to see what it would look like ...
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: Greek myths
Agamemnon was killed by Clytemnestra. They were originally married, but while he was fighting in the Trojan war, she was sleeping with Aegisthus. When he came back, she killed him. ...
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Re: Title Feedback
A witty, sardonic satire of a dysfunctional family. If the blurb was good, I'd probably pick it up. Abkhazia, Resolute
Jul 5, 2008 -
Re: Religion and Suffering
...not necessarily suffering from religion. I'm working on a short(ish) piece that takes a look at events in the latter 20th century through the 21st century, and tries to reconcile ...
Jul 5, 2008 -
Re: Gypsie Eyes: chapter four
Hey, Gyr! Yessss, chapter four. ^_^ I'm really excited for this--it seems that things are picking up speed. It's really fun once you get into the middle of a novel ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: need help with a title
Hey, GML! This was a really cool piece--it was neat how you blended John with his classmates' perceptions of him. John himself is a really sad character, but someone a ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Tarot Trip Travesties
Hey, clograbby! Huzzah! More of your writing. This is such a cool idea, original or not. I love how the characters are all very unique and fit together in the ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: The lost soldier 1
Hey, Willow! Yay! More World War Two stuff. I thought the angle you took with this was interesting--Alyssa isn't on the front lines, and kind of lives her life in ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: The Lone One
Hey, deafwriter! This was a really cool idea for a story. ^_^ I loved that you made it interesting, without being preachy. People are usually tempted to go preachy and ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Random Literary Works
That's so cool! I'm relieved it won't pull old stuff up, so. XD Thanks, Nate.
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Gerrymandering (3)
Thank you for all the reviews--I'm so sorry I didn't get this up sooner. ___ When Shuqiao was growing up in Wuhan, she had been a witness to murder. The ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Gun Laws
I'm not saying in countries where guns are illegal there is no gun crime, but it's highly reduced. Because you don't have...guns to commit gun crimes with. Not having guns ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Gun Laws
England has banned handguns, but the number of knife crimes in London has spiked in the past couple of years. Just because you outlaw guns doesn't mean people will stop ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Khalilzad in 1995 (chapter one)
Hey, Pattycakes! Welcome to YWS. Oooh, PD. XD I'm an extemper, so I've been lured to the Dark Side several times, but have always frolicked back to the file box ...
Jun 30, 2008
