Sam

Sam + Formatting = epicfail. For a few of the pieces, I'll do my best, but if you have a few extra minutes it might be worth just reading through ...

Hey, curlyqpride! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ I'm certain someone else will bark at you for this, too--but we have this thing (some might call it an obsession) about having two ...

Yay! Saint stuff! I don't think I've read Whiskey on a Sunday , but I absolutely adore your first line, your title, and pretty much everything about this chapter. Most ...

Hey, Bittersweet! Yesss, I love Cupid and Psyche. It's such a girl story--you walk in on your invisible lover, and he's a gorgeous guy with wings? What could be better? ...

JFW! *glomps* Okay, so. You know how much I love your writing already; I don't think I need to repeat myself. ^_~ I'm a sucker for the "a lot in ...

Hey, dacoozed! I know it's been a few days, but welcome to YWS. ^_~ Oooh, diary format. You're a brave girl. XD Luckily, though, it seems that you have a ...

Hey, sofi! Firstly--you live in UAE? You lucky goon. *huffs* I've heard Dubai is amazing. ^_^ I really love your writing style in this piece--you obviously know what you're doing, ...

Hey, lxtmidnight! Congrats on finishing the novel! That's definitely the hardest part. XD Editing is a pain, but it's a lot easier than putting fresh words on paper, and can ...

Hey, mizz-iceberg! Sorry it took so long for someone to get to this piece. :( If you have another piece that's not getting as many critiques as you would like, ...

Sarah! *rubs with fish* Basically? I love this piece--the title is awesome, and you had a few lines ("my darling is so cliché", for one) that I read over several ...

Hey, Zorakero! XD This story is great. It's short, too, which would normally make me a little leery, but you pulled it off well. You have a very comfortable style ...

Hey, Jstlkuimgnd! I definitely love the "piggishness" you have going on in this story--the flip-flopping between POVs was done really well and added something to the story rather than being ...

Hey again, Pattycakes! You have no idea how happy this story makes me. XD I've been giving gleeful practice speeches in its honor. Your main character is definitely coming along, ...

Hey again, Willow! I must admit, I got so caught up in this segment that I forgot to write stuff down for the critique. XD Oh, well--that's definitely a compliment. ...

*glee* I really adore that title--it's probably something lighthearted and mockingly woeful. I'd definitely pick it up. Western Eyes