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Hey, M.B.Author! Wow, Zoey had kind of a terrible day. XD I thought she was an interesting character, though--the bit about her knowing the weather was really cool. Some people ...

Hey, Woodleyz Writtingz! Ooh, cool story--you can definitely make something really creepy and exciting out of this. The premise is really interesting, too, and I'm really intrigued to know the ...

Hey, curlyq! Ooh, I like Kate. She's easy to sympathize with, even though she's a "bad" person--I still care about her, even though she does immoral things. You also switched ...

Buh-rad! You know how much I love Will--even though it's just the beginning of the story, I can tell why you chose him as the narrator. He's not overbearing enough ...

Hey, Pattycakes! Sorry it took me so long to respond. Oh, goodness. XD The exercises were hysterical--I think forensics is the only place on earth where talking to walls is ...

Hey, ashley! Oh, dear. I kind of adore this story--the way you told it was really beautiful. It feels sensual, something that kind of befits talking about the Romans in ...

Hey, fantasyfreak! Yay! Someone did the Witch Trials. ^_^ They're so creepy, which is why I thought you did an excellent job on twisting them a little--we're taught to believe ...

Razor! *squee* Renee is a great character--I'll be interested to see how you handle all of the fun psychology stuff as we go along. As addicts, your characters are really ...

I still can't thank you enough for the critiques. ^_^ I have changed around the order of some things--don't freak out. If you can correct my German, I might love ...

Hey, mizpink! Welcome to YWS. I know a few other people will probably bark at you too, but a quick rule--we ask that you keep a 2:1 ratio in the ...

Yay! More Clo stuff. ^_^ I absolutely love this piece--it's just surreal enough to be awesome without being completely unrecognizable. It's something that's familiar, and though the situation is fanta

Yay! Curlyq! ^_^ Like I mentioned with the last chapter, I still can't get over at how relate-able these characters odd. It's kind of insane--most people when they're writing romances ...

Hey, curlyq! Oh, dear, the mildly embarrassing best friend. XD My best friend speaks Chinese, though, and so do most of my friends, so she can make fun of me ...

Hey, ArtisanofGuild! This was a fun story to read--with the sort of "death" character, it had a very fairy-tale feel. I especially liked Samira-the-forbidden-girlfriend. She was a great touch, and ...

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