Sam

Well, it was funny...you can't expect to say anything funny around me without quoting it somewhere. :P 7/10 because it's cool..BUT I HAVE NO IDEA WHERE THE HECK IT CAME ...

8/10 because you quote Harry Potter AND Artemis Fowl...and the AF quote is really cool. I remember that...

(it doesn't, but he was talking about Napoleon Dynamite, which made it hilarious) 7/10 because the first one's great :P

One thing: 'Upon further thought, he realized the morbidity of decorating a child’s room with such a violent story.' I like the idea of this, but I don't wholly agree ...

3. A little stuttering is okay, but after awhile it gets repetitous. He's flustered, yeah, I got that, but if you use one or two at the beginning, it sets ...

Woah, this is sad. The first post in my own thread. WHY IS FONTROY'S DAD ON MY BUDDY LIST?! The world may never know.

Your grammar and sentences rock, missy, so I can't pick on those. However... DIALOGUE 1. For a harried situation, your dialogue is a bit long and involved. Build some tension- ...

Come As You Are- Nirvana

Meh, may I say it again: Green Day. My blog...especially since now I've got actual material to put in it. Self-centered as it seems, I like reading over again too, ...

1039 Smoothed-Out Slappy Hours - Green Day Not the best CD ever created, but it's good old-fashioned rock 'n' roll. Plenty of guitar solos and good stuff like that. :P

(Qi- damn, that guy is BUFF! was said by a guy himself. :wink: He's a bit on the homosexual side, but still.) 5/10 because it's too deep for me...:P AND ...

^^ taught me the drinking age in canada is 19...

1. What is the world coming to?!?! (Ciara is...a hermaphrodite...and the dude from Good Charlotte is dating HILARY DUFF...*barf*) 2. For the photo in my blog...where'd they buy their clothes? ...

Furbys all the way!

6/10 because of the grammar thing, but you lost points because you got rid of the 'seen a guy in jeans, bad hair, and hawaiian shirt?'