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Re: A Siren's Fingerpaint
Kylan! Ohhh, my goodness. You did not just make an amazing symbol-- there's blood on her hands = there's ink on her hands . Good God. Stop being brilliant, I ...
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Re: A Siren's Voicebox
Hey, Kylan! XD I have to say, I loved the "partaken of a bitter cup" line, just because it's very KJV. If you're going to write a story about sin, ...
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Re: Smoke Follows Beauty- Part Two
Hey, Bitter! Okay, so the last line is completely innocent and perfect . I love it! The characters are really interesting when we get to see them from all different ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Mixed Emotions
Hey, Hopeless Romantic! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ Ooh, a horsey Pride & Prejudice girl. She's a great character, even though the poor dear has to be married off to some ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: The lost soldier 4
Hey, Willow! Awww, the last part! That's too bad. XD I looked forward to new pieces of these that you posted. You wrapped up the end very nicely, and did ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: ww1 Short Story
Hey, chaplin! Good job on following the reviews-to-stories ratio. ^_~ Welcome to YWS! If you ever have any questions about the site or life in general, don't hesitate to PM ...
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Re: The Christine Experiment #1 - The End
Jaaaaared! Okay, so not only do you rule for reading like, everything I've ever written, but this piece was fantastic. I can't wait to see where you'll go with it ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Petra pt 1
*pants* Hey, Olivia! I'm here! Quick note--I know you asked me to review this, but normally I wouldn't, just because I'd be looking through and go, "Oh! This person has ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Punk is Not Dead
For Tilly. I'm too lazy to look up actual Shari'a punishments again, so I apologize for any accidental fabrication. It's pretty close, but you never know. ^_~ This was using ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Dirt in My Own Grave ch. 4
Hey, Saint! Yayyyy, more Eric! This chapter wasn't as terrible as you think. ^_~ Eric's character came out really well with this one, and it was fun to finally see ...
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Re: Pink High Tops and Buterfly Wings
Hey, KailaMarie! This prompt looks familiar. ^_~ I'm loving reading all the different responses to the same thing--they're so different! This piece was cool because it was kind of sarcastic, ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Turquoise Chapter Three
Hey again, KBrowlingmeyerFAN! Haha, this story just keeps better and better. ^_~ I'm really glad you're sticking with it! I love Charlie, and this new conflict with Nathaniel is beyond ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Papier-mache and Purple
Hey, alleycat! I absolutely adored this piece. It's simple, but beautiful--just like the butterfly costume you were describing. The character is really well rounded, and you fit a lot of ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: The Watchers
Hey, Conrad! I've got to say, that was the most original plot I've seen in a long while. It was really crisply executed--it wrapped itself up, strings and all, in ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Du Og Meg
Clo! Okay, so, I'm delirious with happiness. This piece was packed with your usual beauty ("Her mother was composed of depression and nothing else; she walked with it, she used ...
Aug 2, 2008
