Sam

HAHA! YES! Ari, quite literally, your writing is 'so shut up'. Good God. It was nostalgic and reflective but not overly Well-I'm-Eighty-Years-Old-And-Looking-Back-On-My-Glory-Days. YES!!!! 'He had bee

This is pretty good, it's just kind of hard to read since it's, quite frankly, grammatically screwed. Let's make it un-screwed, shall we? “I really don’t see the point in ...

Apply Some Pressure- Maximo Park And it's so uplifting...:P

8/10- TELL 'EM, SISTER! Woah, okay...Sam's having a moment...:P

NOOOOO!!! My dear friend, you've fallen into the trap of Well-This-Seems-Incomplete-But-I-Don't-Wanna-Put-Said-In-Here-Because-That's-A-No-No, as do most people. And when you've got pretty good materi

'But its body was numb. ' I somehow thought it was a shadow, and therefore incapable of having a body. But it could be just me. :P The whole piece ...

Read more and write more. Develop "skills". Play more sports. MWAHAHAHAH! I got that...:P Anyway, yeah, I'd have to add the sports thing to my list. As much as I ...

You've also got to get your point across quickly (in a fairly straightforward manner) or the reader will get bored to death or just plain confused.

It was? Darn liiiiiies...:P I'm going to have to add more albums- Summer in Abbadon- Pinback Get Behind Me Satan- The White Stripes Guero- Beck Good stuff. EDIT: No, wait...I ...

Rock, rock, rock 'n' roll highschool! :P La Vie Boheme- Broadway Cast of Rent

1. Finish Hourglass 2. Finish The Survivors of Math 217 (haha, I'll be busy) 3. Get back my 80% in Math...(hey, in 217, it's all good)

:D 9/10- I really like it; oft felt like that...and it's true! 10/10- HAHAHA! That's true too!

7/10- It's original, but some punctuation mistakes. (You knew I couldn't resist. :P)

*does creepy snarfling thing like that German dude from Indiana Jones* Oh yes, ve love newbies...*hides knife* Hehe, just kidding.

Well, then why do you like them? :P