-
Re: The Idiots At the Bus Stop (title pending)
Er...yep. New piece, thought I'd try something new. (Sorry it sort of cuts off at the was all I felt like typing. :P) The smell of grease, cigarette smoke, and ...
Jan 24, 2006 -
Re: Untitled- (beginning of a story, please criticise)
First of all...does it go on? Or did you just end it there? Because if you did, that would be bad, and you most definitely need to add something. :P ...
Jan 21, 2006 -
Re: Free write (aka... Dusky's rant in story form)
It was rather a nice rant... But yeah. I thought the whole exchange between Charlie and his friends was far too low key- especially on the subject of girls. Could ...
Jan 21, 2006 -
Re: Just Some Random Amusing Quotes (some light expletives)
Oh, entire blog fits the description..:wink:
Jan 20, 2006 -
Re: What are you listening to at the moment?
Worth the Wait- We Are Scientists (Their CD- With Love and Squalor, o'course- just came out in the US...all I can say is YAY!)
Jan 18, 2006 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You.
10/10 The penguins totally made the movie...if it weren't for then, the whole experience would stink. :P
Jan 18, 2006 -
Re: The Smile
This would be a totally awesome beginning to a story... 'A fleeting memory had crossed the netherregions of her mind' YAY!!! I absolutely love that word...I must use it... 'a ...
Jan 18, 2006 -
Re: Marcus and Charlotte
It's quite Lurlene McDaniel... The piece was pretty inspirational, though, as we all sort of (in our own way) strive to be like Marcus- positive and fearless. He's got the ...
Jan 18, 2006 -
Re: Voice
This was a really good piece- it gave you quite an insight into the business world (especially since everything made so much sense. How in the world did you pull ...
Jan 18, 2006 -
Re: Minor Contribution
This was quite good, I've gotta say! I really liked the way you put in his thoughts about her and then added in some real-action stuff to back him up. ...
Jan 18, 2006 -
Re: Some Important Changes Coming...
You don't need to be grammatically sound to have a good critique. In fact, the person whose peice you're critiquing probably cares the LEAST about grammar. They want to know ...
Jan 18, 2006 -
Re: Chapters and Parts
Even though I am STILL totally against them, Snoinkus...:P How do you decide when to split things into chapters/sections/whatever? Is there a certain, universally agreed-upon point to do it? Argh...th
Jan 18, 2006 -
Re: Maybe at Your Door
Yeah, I have to agree. It's a good idea, but the last line you have read over a couple times before you get it. It's not the imagery...it's the way ...
Jan 17, 2006 -
Re: Some Important Changes Coming...
This is a WRITERS' site, not a total party site. If you don't have time to critique, then wait till you have time and don't come on until then! It's ...
Jan 17, 2006 -
Re: Member of the Week 1/15 - 1/22
WAHOO!!! I dedicate a Disco Moment to Dusky! WHEE! :D Good job!
Jan 17, 2006