Sam

Welcome! Hmm...maybe something like 'Storm Chaser' or even just 'Soldier'? You'd want to keep the roughness of the title to make it work. *thinks* I'll tell you if I come ...

SNOINKUS!!!!!!! Guess what is the major problem with Emily? There are no problems! THINGS THAT EMILY HAS GOING FOR HER: 1. She's pretty (when she's got make-up on). 2. She ...

Pretty sweet...and a killer last line. However, there were TOO MANY EXCLAMATION POINTS! Augh! You can truly skewer a perfectly good piece of writing with exclamation points...which is why you've ...

Hey, this is pretty good! I'd have to agree with Snoink though on the grammar...and some of it is just awkward. But we'll fix that, eh? 'Nothing. There was absolutely ...

You have an absolutely GRAND storyline, dahling, but this story is seriously...ugh. Why? GRAMMAR! I shall become ze Grammar Nazi and lead you through some basic stuff to help this ...

Hehe! I remember when I wrote that...happy, grammatically incorrect days...

You click the button and it gives you suggestions...:P Yes! Thank you snoinky! (cue for angels to begin singing)

Hehe, I do the exact same usually sounds better, like you said. :P

Oh, man, a very, very good ending. However, for such an exciting story you put a little too much emphasis on description and not what's actually going on. It seems ...

And then I awake with a start, gripping the dusty, grimy side of an Adirondack chair wtih my sweaty hands. "That's the problem with these storms," says Jeremy. I can ...

Thank Dusky for leading me to this...it's the only good thing I've read this week...:D "Don’t believe it. Someone is trying to spread the rumor that life is easy." I'd ...

I love the way you introduce your characters. It's never anything normal, "The boy with the brown hair's name is Billy" or anything like that. It's purely unique, and it ...

Oh, Mr. Joe, I love you so. Why? I have the exact same problem... Find little pockets of time, like if you walked home from school a bit earlier, when ...

If by math you mean mathematical logic and English you mean literature, then heck yes, it's math. Modus Ponens makes so much more sense to me than any of the ...

Clarify? (Sorry, can't think right now. :P)