Sam

This story was hilarious- however, would people be so dumb as to believe that alien sightings could be forecasted, like the weather? That's the only thing that really confused me. ...

It would also be best if this were a part of a larger story, instead of this segment all by itself- at this point, we don't really know who these ...

A white/green chunky striped Polo sweatshirt and Claiborne slacks...I was muy muy lazy today.

Excellent! You didn't really have the sarcastic tone built up so it was sort of unexpected...but yeah. Do as you wish.

Ah, Jack. That's pretty much sums it up...pain and passion amidst the gritty backdrop of early 19th century Britannia? One word- yum. I'd mainly like to commend you on how ...

Okay, Hekate and Pandora (irony? hehehe) are both very right in the fact that it's good. This is, indeeed- but it's got some major blank spots that need to be ...

YAY MATTIE! Very, very excellent, I've got to say...hooked? Definitely. How else could I read through four posts in a sitting? Mmm, well, the characters of Renee and Shannon need ...

Oooh! You started out fairly weak, but once you got past the fifth paragraph or so, it was truly a great read. Wholly excellent, in fact. The story just sort ...

I was gonna say...read my blog. :P

...could it be? Sam's actually written something? :shock: The pickup veers off the Interstate and onto a dusty gravel road, becoming a rusty blue speck a ten-mile radius of grassy ...

I thought you meant 'Marc in Cleopatra's lover, but we won't go there. :P Ah, Misty, I shall critique when you get on MSN, since I owe you. Big time.

I've never read anything Zane, but it got me pretty hooked anyway. :wink: Anyway... First off, try to avoid all caps in a story- especially if you're working on something ...

'And because I am the second of these eight children, and the oldest girl, I have certain responsibilities the younger kids don’t. For instance, each morning, one of my jobs ...

The Iceberg Hermit by Whatshisface... 6th grade L.A. book. Argh. I don't remember all the books I've hated with a passion. I usually put books that I don't like down ...

When I first saw this, I said to myself, "Oh, lovely, another dialogue-less, attempting-to-be-deep piece of crap that I'm going to have to force myself to read from here on ...