Sam

' The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men ...

It all really depends on whether or not you believe in Hell, too. If they think it's real, then your act might be an act of love. But if they ...

Ooh, thanks, Fishr! I've changed a quite a few of the grammatical/structural things already, and everything is sounding quite nice. :D You got the characters dead on...except for one thing: ...

Ahoy! STUFF YOU DID WELL: - Personally, I'd classify this as a fanfic- and you did really well pulling off Georgia. Of course, it wasn't identical, but it is really ...

*is extremely proud* You actually put in some of my suggestions! Two more things: - The November wind (again). Obviously, it'll be cold. It'll add to the starkness that you're ...

I've got really very little to complain about...but of course, that wouldn't be the way of the SPEW. :wink: So! STUFF YOU DID WELL: - The symbolism was fantastic. Usually ...

Oh, dear! I totally forgot to thank you properly! So...sentence revision is in order! Let me go get my machete...(deep breath taken here). I'm not really sure what I'm going ...

But! I was young and stupid! :P

I totally agree with Smaur on NaNoWriMo. I went from writing maybe a chapter a week to...well, 50k in a month. And your writing style really changes after that- I'm ...

But see, Snoinkus? That's a namesake! :D But names CAN'T make a man a man or...you get my point. Roaming Shadow- I actually read an article on stereotyping and the ...

Try writing your novel as a series of flash fiction stories. It might not be exactly what you were going for, but hey...you've found what you're good at and can ...

*waves* Hiya, Willow! STUFF YOU DID WELL: - You create a bit of strife for your character to go through without going overboard. The other characters are the ones concerned- ...

Ooh! *claps hands* A kindred spirit! I've got...*counts fingers* five different characters who narrate in my story. Then I split up the story into several parts- and each would have ...

Characters are tough. In fact, they're probably the hardest part of your stories to write- you've got to make them flawed as people, yet come off flawlessly in the story. ...

And almost every story has a sarcastic/comedic relief character...so...you've always got someone handy.