Sam

1. I put in some sort of greeting, which usually amounts to 'hey'. 2. General good stuff about the story is described. 3. I get very long and rambly about ...

I vaguely remember reading the first chapter a long time ago and liking it...glad to see the second part! Here's just a few things I caught: - Jasmine's a little...whiney ...

It doesn't matter how old you are- a piece of bad writing is a piece of bad writing. Even if the people are eleven, it's still helpful to factor in ...

Hey! I haven't seen you around if you've got any questions about the site or my critique (which will be long and rambly, as usual), feel free to PM or ...

I would agree with Claudette in that this chapter didn't make as much sense as the others. For one, I thought the whole thing between Imogen and Owen was a ...

Ooh! More conflict! This section was good, although short, so there's only one comment: - I take it Cady's not from England, she's from America (hence the name), which is ...

This is a good story so far- the style is easy to read, yet you do quite a bit of showing instead of telling. How do you do it? :shock: ...

A few things I noticed: - The beginning didn't really draw me in. I liked the middle part very much, but the very beginning? Not so much. If I were ...

Thanks for reading, Myth! Yeah...I thought that piece was a little lacking, as well, but hey- rewriting is fun, too. :wink: Thanks again!

I ususally get as many as I need- of course, like everyone said, it'd be nice to get more, but least I've got a few. :D

I would add in more about how crazily fun it is- and about the spiffy winner's certificate. There seemed to be a little more emphasis on who lost, rather than ...

On Gmail, I spied an ad calling 'NaNoWriMo Participants', and procrastinating on aforementioned project, I clicked on it: It's really quite simple- you enter in your characters' names, and then ...

I read on the NaNoWriMo News Flash (or whatever it's called...:P) that they're planning a 50k in June for screenplays. Anyone interested?

- Make friends with one of the 125k'ers. They make you feel horrible and hopeless and pathetic...and then you write five thousand words to make up for it. - Plan ...

Hey, Pros! I don't think I've ever read any of your stuff before- but this was a great first impression, in my book (not...literally, of course). Your main character was ...