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My only comment on this would be- you need a really, really good set of actors to be able to pull this off properly. Why? Inexperienced actors aren't going to ...

I like the description one especially...die, clichès! Descriptions don't really have to make sense, they just have to trigger something in your reader's brain that says, "Oh, yeah..." That didn't ...

I liked having the Squills posts on the front page- whatever happened to that? Hmm...If I think of anything else, I'll tell you. Thanks, Nate! EDIT: Maybe a 'to critique' ...

I got that too...she was totally Deidre. :P Duckie- you're welcome! *exalts* That's such an excellent theme, especially with your topic. I'll look carefully for that on the next chapters, ...

I use different types of music for different types of 'feel' in my stories- Decemberists are for general scenes, Cold War Kids for especially emotional ones, and Muse for battle ...

Hey, Gabrielle! *cheers* Another history geek! You can check out the 'History Lovers' or 'Historical Writers' usergroups, if you want to hang out with the rest of us...er...socially awkward people. ...

Hey, Adam! This had a really cool, conversational style to it that flowed well and helped to keep the story going. It made me laugh quite a bit, too- your ...

Hey! I thought this story was intersting, mainly because it started out being normal- and then more-than-convincingly turned out to be a dream. The cheapest plot twist in the book? ...

I think ten as well...a count will also be in order for me. :P

I'm with Jennafina- I loved your style,too. It flows really well, and really keeps the character in mind (something you were going for, I see!). There was one major thing ...

I don't suppose so...I'm always David, right? There's no change- at least, I don't think so. Hmm. - David There's this phase- the 'wearing trousers and swaggering 'round with a ...

Hey (again)! Glad to see Chapter Two...the action continues! Glad you finally resolved that whole 'does he have superpowers, or does he not?' thing- it was beginning to bother me, ...

You've poured your heart and soul into your latest critique. With a copy of Strunk and White in hand, you pored through the rough draft, putting in EVERY. SINGLE. COMMA ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS- we don't bite. (Maybe?) I really liked the air of mystery you put around your man character (Mositas, was it?) and her journey. Even though we ...

I call 'em 'Word Wars' (a la NaNoWriMo) so I feel productive, but usually something weird and cool results. It's quite fun, especially when you don't really care about anything ...