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Uhm, yeah, you got me hooked- from the front page, actually. :wink: Good job, Claude! It's very rambly (in a good way); very Nabokov- especially in the confession at the ...

Trash, really. But then again, I don't remember writing most of it... - Adelais My poetry? I beg your pardon! It's quite well, which you might note if you read ...

I liked Snoinkus' tip: It's okay to be boring. Boring scenes are good. Hehe, I love your soapboxes! Very good advice, and fun to read. :D

Pff, this was a looong time ago...that's okay, though. I may do something with it yet still- mainly because I like the setting. Hooray for peripatetic readers!

PFF, this was the intro to my NaNoWriMo, ended up very weird. Glad you liked it, though! :P Thanks again for reading, guys.

Impressive numbers, Bubbles!

Uhm...perhaps. Serendipitous, isn't it? - Luke No. If I were to rule the world, I'd be assassinated within seconds. -Master Blackwell What sort of film/book/music story makes you teary? Why?

There are three basic stages- Condensation, Evaporation, and Precipitation (these can go in any order). Basically, rain falls to the earth, then is evaporated (meaning it turns into water vapor ...

Ooh, that is a good title... Usually, I do this with chapter or section titles- I don't write enough different things to have experience. :wink: When I get them, though, ...

I read on your 'Welcome' forum post that you came to YWS for the good critiques...er...*hides collection of 'This wuz gr8! Keep writin'!'* Uhm, no pressure? :P Anyway, welcome to ...

It's just a script for a movie- though I think you can adapt it to a play. Like NaNo...anything goes! Hehe, I hope you can catch it next November. It's ...

Ooh, Cass...your style is very good. It flows nicely and says a lot in a small space- a grand thing, I assure you. :wink: There was a little confusion in ...

Darn you, CL! You're so...thorough! Hehe...some great tips here, even for other genres. *cough* (The beauty thing...)

PFF, hehe, that makes sense...keep that line in there, then. Perhaps the very first line? Start with a bang. What's this for, exactly?

Hehehe... I love stage improv/combat- acting out scripted work bugs me, which is why I like either directing or writing. Other people have to listen to me, then. :P We'll ...