Sam

Friend! ...but, ah, I'm my own best friend, aren't I? Such a sad state of affairs, really. - Adelais Foe. I mean, look what happened to Shakespeare! And Virgil! And ...

Hmm, I'd agree with Claudette- but it might be kind of cool if you put those little paragraphs were you are speaking in present tense in italics. That way, it's ...

After reading two examples (the latter from Snoink's FREAK, of which I'm aware you're a fan), pick which one makes the most sense or is the most comprehensible... CHOICE A ...

Hey! Hmm... this was an interesting piece- a sort of 'what would happen if...?' thing. Kind of scary to read, actually. :P I like your main character (she's pretty likeable, ...

Granted, but you still have to clean your neighbor's house. I wish I understood math.

I agree with the bit about the fragments- they're nice, but in moderation. You've got such a great way with words, all they need is some rhythm to back 'em ...

An easy thing to do to make sure that the punctuation/capitalization in your poetry is correct is to mush it all together like a paragraph of a story. Did you ...

Oooh, I love Stroud...very good stuff. Welcome to the forums! Hope you enjoy your time...or else! Maybe? Hehe, well, feel free to PM any of us if you've got any ...

Pip...that's a more than uberly awesome name. Welcome to the forums! Like others before me have probably said, try reviewing a few things before you post a story- there are ...

Yay! We're all amateurs, too, but it's the trying to get better that helps, right? Hope to read some of your stuff soon- feel free to PM any of us ...

*brushes dust off head* Oh, I know how addicting it can be...I've been sitting here for eight months straight. Well, welcome, Fael! Hope to read some of your stuff soon- ...

Granted- but they're all stolen from otherwise well-meaning members who earned them. Hmm... I wish I could write five critiques tonight.

Me? I...comb my hair, at least. Not much else to do in that department. And let me answer for Upton, because he's hilarious and won't admit it. He doesn't sleep ...

...no. But of course, that's just my optimistic, sunshiny outlook rearing its head, no? - Adelais I think so. I hope people like, me, in any case... -David Are you ...

Ah, NaNoWriMo's pretty much gotten rid of any writer's block that might haunt me- basically, the strategy is: 'story hit a dead end? Throw in a couple of rogue ice ...