Sam

*taps end of rifle with boot* Eh, guess. -Lieutenant I tend to get calmer when I'm angry (which usually means I'm plotting). Sort of wish I yelled, though- the plans ...

*squeals* Bella Luna-san wa Nihongo o hanashimasu!!! ^_^ Watashi no namae wa Sam desu. Watashi wa Nihongo de hanashimasu (eeto...Sam wa heta desu). Watashi wa Bella Luna-san no monogatari o ...

Publishing would be great - making a job out of writing in itself would be great. (This is mainly because I have no organizational skills, working with people in general ...

Sorry it took me so long to read this, Myth- it's been a crazy week. :oops: So! I read over a few of the critiques before I read (which technically ...

Heya, Moosie! First off, I thought this story was really interesting because not a whole people can write about bands and make it interesting- the Stiff Dylans in the 'Georgia ...

Hehe, we shan't have any trouble with that- procrastinating on writing? :wink: Good article, Cass! I'd never thought about it that way before, and it's always nice to have some ...

Hey, Eleina! You've been around the boards for awhile, but I've been rather antisocial, so...here's my belated 'Hello'. :D SOME THOUGHTS ON DASHES: You can use dashes instead of quotation ...

I started at about age six, when I decided that I was going to write a story about an adventurous (and mischievious!) set of twins who go to the Grand ...

I'm so glad they mentioned something about elves...I may actually be able to critique fantasy without gagging! *angry mob of fantasy writers swarms Sam* Mmm....I should leave now.

Ooh, Smaurness! Forget the cookie of love- can I frame this and tape it up above my desk? :P

It's pretty amusing how we disagree on everything, Brad...if we critiqued the same piece, I think the author would have a spastic fit or a run-in with cardiac arrest. :wink: ...

I've heard through a lot of posts that you think your writing is boring- with lots of description, and very little action. I read this with absolutely no tolerance at ...

'Jacksonville'... I love the way that every song is in a bit different style- it really represents the state, or the planet, or whatever the album is centered around. Yummy ...

This is a very interesting first paragraph, but it's very short! You've got to give us a little bit more of an idea who Johnny is before we can decide ...

seems like I recommend this to everyone, but do the 'Fortunately/Unfortunately' game, because conflict is always good. :wink: Basically, you start with a simple sentence, like: "Bobby wants to go ...