Sam

Hey! Ooh, some more historical fiction and girls who kick butt. :wink: Let's get to your critique, shall we? BAD GUY SYNDROME: Bad guys seem simple- deceptively so. We just ...

Hey, Baroness! Mmm, good story. Jyoozu , as they say in Japan when you've done well. :wink: But, of course, being myself, I've gotta rip things apart, so- your critique! ...

Teehee, konnichiwa! Ooh! I need to go read that story- very eye-catching, in its little place on the front page. ...can we Shanghai you into our gang of savage thirteen-year-olds? ...

Hey, Gigi! Welcome to YWS- I haven't seen you around before. Hope you like it, though. It's very strange, but the people are friendly. Well, let's get to your critique, ...

Hey, Michelle! Hehe, I remember being the lone ten-year-old on the site...kinda sad. Shows how long I've been here, right? Anyway, let's get to your critique, shall we? I'm brutally ...

One question, Cal- when you've got third person (which I'm working in now and am scared out of my mind) can you switch between the limited and the omniscent or ...

Ah, but El, you're already a better writer than Paolini. ...he's the type of person you tack up on your bulletin board to make you feel better when you think ...

No. -Upton Eh, well, depends on the lighting, I suppose. Darkness makes me look absolutely gorgeous. - Luke Father and Sonya say I am, but I don't know. Who am ...

A change from heroine addiction and little green girls? Uhm...yeah. :wink: You were worried about publishing awhile ago- Mack, Graham, All-American Kid. Quite honestly, it was all worthy, but you ...

I think the last time I wasn't sleeping on dirt was in Boston- after a certain point, fleas and hay seem very appealing. -Jeremy In his boardingroom in the city, ...

And then there's the difference between にんぎん and にんじん...learned the hard way. :wink: Oooh! I've been wanting now- what are some Japanese slang phrases? I know すげー (wonderful) and

Hey, Parker! You've sneakily picked a time period I know nothing about, so I'm just going to have to take your word for it that the details are correct and ...

Ah, you guys are so cool...Lucy, you're right. That man is a bit of a prat, isn't he? Down with him! RAMBLE #2: 'PURGATORY' AND INTRODUCING WEIRD CHARACTERS: May as ...

Heya, Erin! Welcome to YWS- I haven't seen you around before. :D SOME BORING GRAMMAR STUFF: Most readers and critiquers will love you forever if you just press 'return' after ...

Oh, my God! *dies in heap of coolness* The freak show? That's got to be nice and conflict-happy. :D Just the setting has got to be yummy. Old fashioned, but ...