Sam

Uhm..Giggly Goose! Ah, a hard thing to explain, since I didn't speak any English at the time...but when I was brought to Virginia, to the Verplancks', Liberty allowed me to ...

Hey, Belle! I'm very, very glad to see more historical stuff on the boards- well-written stuff, too. What I do is pretty simple: I pick out a few areas that ...

Hey, Luke! Cool story- you managed to put in a lot of action and a lot of different perspectives without making it clunky or boring. An interesting take, too, on ...

Again, not even a single spelling mistake for me to rant about. Pity. Time-travel shall be interesting, especially as a NaNo...although, it's very hard to do time travel well, so ...

The 'this is so not my day' was quite funny- it held the piece together in that CL-esque, dark way. :wink: Bah. I'm guilty of the one line-critique, I suppose- ...

Hey, CL! Because you're special and because there wasn't anything huge that I noticed, you get a special critique- in bullets, instead of main ideas! Whoopee! Aren't you lucky? :wink: ...

YAY! I am very, very behind on my Guttersnipe...I suppose I'll have to go on an CL-only critiquing spree?

Bah, I should really practice what I preach, right, Imp? :wink: Thanks for pointing out the modifiers- I have seemingly have a bit of a problem with using them, seemingly ...

Ahoy there, Jack! Ah, I'd almost forgotten that your fantasy was pretty awesome, too. Mmm. The description in this seemed to incorporate more of your poetry- the line was blurred, ...

...I quite like this Tov fellow. Really? The meaning of life changes depending on what's running through your veins. If it's blood, then it's God and martyrdom and all sorts ...

...who just outlined the first part of her novel? Hmm? Anyone? Take a wild guess! No, not Angelina Jolie, you goons. ME! There's the first section of Hourglass, if you're ...

The playwriting, as I've said, shall be very interesting- your dialogue is very good, and such a large amount of practice can only make it better. :wink: You shall have ...

Heya, Cass! Ooh...a story about a druggie that's not preachy in the direct POV. Very, very nice. COMEDY AND TRAGEDY: This story is hilarious to me. That's a bad thing. ...

Why, hello there, Snoinkus! I commend you on being able to narrative daytime television without a single Oprah joke. You're a living example of a person with 'major skills'. :wink: ...

Thanks, guys! :D Yeah, that paragraph is a bit odd- most certainly something to chop up. Is there anything unclear? I've had these characters prancing about like loons in my ...