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Re: Flames of Lecraesa: Chapter 2 (A Ruined Courtyard)
Hey again, WD! Ooh, more conflict with Strick and new surroundings, yet. Quite good stuff. I've even established a habit, now- I finish my math homework, and then sit with ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Yo-la!
OMG!!! An Ouran High fan! *Just so you know, that's the first time I've used OMG in a year. It's used only for special occasions.* Ooh, 'ampersand' is such a ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Oh my God...semi-colons. By far. They make you look so refined and elegant; even if you have no idea how to use them. See? That was probably grammatically incorrect; but ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Ultra-short Fiction
"What the Hell are palm fronds?" Ethan was peering at his textbook, inadequate glasses only blurring the words before him. "I think it's an ice cream flavor," a voice behind ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Night Whisperings
Hey, Lady Pirate! This was a super-awesome story- very creepy, but you interspersed just enough real-life to keep it universally interesting. I hope there'll be another chapter... A few things, ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: POD 1- On Both Accounts
Hey! Ooh, I really enjoyed this story- teen angst, with a twist. The way you put it together was quite unconventional, too...I especially loved the italicized paragraph of the prologue. ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Hourglass No. 2
Currently being edited to death. ^_^
Apr 8, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
To put it simply: there is a government-sanctioned organization out to kill me, and, what's more, there's a five-thousand-pound price tag on my head. Hurrah. - Luke Summer is nearing ...
Apr 8, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Girls who squeal. There's nothing that's really scaring them- so why do they do it when they're happy? - David Master Blackwell writes theorems slanting upward when he's excited about ...
Apr 8, 2007 -
Re: Flames of Lecraesa: Chapter 1 (Sray-Valom)
Hey, WD! Bah, you and your awesome first lines. Basically? They rock. I'll start with the things that I noticed first (so I don't forget them), and then I'll go ...
Apr 8, 2007 -
Re: About Linda
Hey, MJ! ...ooh, I do love the title. It's very simple, and Linda is a plain name- meaning, she's interesting in some way. I also like the idea of the ...
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
That's one I'd have to read a jacket flap for- I love numbers in titles, but it doesn't seem to mean anything right off the bat. The Opium Poets
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
I loved Levin! I know! He's a sweetheart, I think. A good guy. ...though, Vronksy is hot, though balding. More on the Russians: Ward No. 9 and Other Stories , ...
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
At night, floating on my back in Corporal's Pond. Grand view, with all the stars shining through the trees...the only drawback is water up your nose, but mankind's killed for ...
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: Syradrum 1 (Falling)
Hey, Roy! This was a very good read- the conflicts and the characters were interesting and your setting was nicely described. With your story I got a panorama...a lot of ...
Apr 7, 2007
