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  • Fiction Discussion Re: Evil

    I find that evil characters a no-no- even the bad guys have to be relatable. They've got to have motives, and when you're focusing on making someone look cruel, the ...

    May 26, 2007
  • Archive Re: Necropolis

    NAME: Lionel Zhou AGE: Nine HEIGHT: 4'5" WEIGHT: 80 lbs. EYES: Brown HAIR: Black PHYSIQUE: Tiny, obviously. Very thin, not very strong- perhaps not an advantage when fighting zombies. EDUCATION: ...

    May 26, 2007
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Agri and the Engineer: 1.1

    Hey, Tinny! I thought this piece was really quite cool- it was futuristic without being overly metallic and harsh, and it was realistic, though elegant. Definitely a mixture that makes ...

    May 26, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Overcoming Jealousy

    Hey, Trackgal! Cool story- diaries are always very fun to read. It's like real snooping, only with a lot better stories. :wink: I did like how realistic the piece was, ...

    May 26, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Perfection- Intro

    Hey, Jessicarabbit! I really, really liked this story- you've got a very easy, flowing style, and of course...you have an awesome girl character in a world where most of them ...

    May 26, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    I don't suppose I notice...that's the thing about living with a girl. One must find ways to avoid the subject altogether. - Luke Yes. Variety is nice. - Adelais No. ...

    May 22, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    Yes, I have- but metal bars are terribly hard to burst through, and I believe the odd mute family was armed...but in both cases, I wanted to be away from ...

    May 19, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: And the Bride Wore Black

    Hey again, Serena! Quick response to your answers above- very cool. However, if I didn't catch all of the little cool plot twist and I'm analyzing this piece, it's probably ...

    May 19, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    I personally think it's too many words- and the 'you' is kind of off-putting. Maybe just "Shadow of a Dream" would be better, since it's a bit easier to swallow. ...

    May 17, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    No. But God also gave us clever minds to get ourselves out of any fix that could have easily been solved with a second chance. It's called 'survival'. - Luke ...

    May 17, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: And the Bride Wore Black

    Hey, Serena! It's really impressive that you hooked me in all the way through, considering it's a more teenlit piece- something I don't normally go for. I absolutely loved it...which ...

    May 17, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Lone Lament; the Pantomime Tales

    Hey, whence! I really like your style of writing- it's elegant, but very simple at the same time. Perhaps my favorite bit was at the begining, when they still deliver ...

    May 16, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Some writing hints please

    It kind of depends on personal preference, disappointing as that sounds. Personally, I like shorter chapters because they make you feel like you're reading faster- a stupid reason, but most ...

    May 13, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    I'd save my father- my mother was always telling me about he was going straight to Hell, but he can't go there if he doesn't die, can he? - David ...

    May 13, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    *rolls up sleeve, revealing brand mark* The moment before the poker hit skin...ah, is there anything more terrifying? - Luke One of Adelais' sketches...the one with the boy in the ...

    May 13, 2007


Everything has to be taken on trust; truth is only that which is taken to be true. It's the currency of living. There may be nothing behind it, but it doesn't make any difference so long as it is honoured. One acts on assumptions. What do you assume?
— Player (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)