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  • Fiction Discussion Re: Evil

    I find that evil characters a no-no- even the bad guys have to be relatable. They've got to have motives, and when you're focusing on making someone look cruel, the ...

    May 26, 2007
  • Archive Re: Necropolis

    NAME: Lionel Zhou AGE: Nine HEIGHT: 4'5" WEIGHT: 80 lbs. EYES: Brown HAIR: Black PHYSIQUE: Tiny, obviously. Very thin, not very strong- perhaps not an advantage when fighting zombies. EDUCATION: ...

    May 26, 2007
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Agri and the Engineer: 1.1

    Hey, Tinny! I thought this piece was really quite cool- it was futuristic without being overly metallic and harsh, and it was realistic, though elegant. Definitely a mixture that makes ...

    May 26, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Overcoming Jealousy

    Hey, Trackgal! Cool story- diaries are always very fun to read. It's like real snooping, only with a lot better stories. :wink: I did like how realistic the piece was, ...

    May 26, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Perfection- Intro

    Hey, Jessicarabbit! I really, really liked this story- you've got a very easy, flowing style, and of course...you have an awesome girl character in a world where most of them ...

    May 26, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    I don't suppose I notice...that's the thing about living with a girl. One must find ways to avoid the subject altogether. - Luke Yes. Variety is nice. - Adelais No. ...

    May 22, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    Yes, I have- but metal bars are terribly hard to burst through, and I believe the odd mute family was armed...but in both cases, I wanted to be away from ...

    May 19, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: And the Bride Wore Black

    Hey again, Serena! Quick response to your answers above- very cool. However, if I didn't catch all of the little cool plot twist and I'm analyzing this piece, it's probably ...

    May 19, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    I personally think it's too many words- and the 'you' is kind of off-putting. Maybe just "Shadow of a Dream" would be better, since it's a bit easier to swallow. ...

    May 17, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    No. But God also gave us clever minds to get ourselves out of any fix that could have easily been solved with a second chance. It's called 'survival'. - Luke ...

    May 17, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: And the Bride Wore Black

    Hey, Serena! It's really impressive that you hooked me in all the way through, considering it's a more teenlit piece- something I don't normally go for. I absolutely loved it...which ...

    May 17, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Lone Lament; the Pantomime Tales

    Hey, whence! I really like your style of writing- it's elegant, but very simple at the same time. Perhaps my favorite bit was at the begining, when they still deliver ...

    May 16, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Some writing hints please

    It kind of depends on personal preference, disappointing as that sounds. Personally, I like shorter chapters because they make you feel like you're reading faster- a stupid reason, but most ...

    May 13, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    I'd save my father- my mother was always telling me about he was going straight to Hell, but he can't go there if he doesn't die, can he? - David ...

    May 13, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    *rolls up sleeve, revealing brand mark* The moment before the poker hit skin...ah, is there anything more terrifying? - Luke One of Adelais' sketches...the one with the boy in the ...

    May 13, 2007


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